Reviews for The Raven's Call |
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Padfoot'smyMan chapter 1 . 5/26 You really want me to suspend belief that Ron could be sorted into Ravenclaw? Yeah, right, when pigs fly. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/5 Having tea with my good friend Lord Voldemort? |
Realmsmith chapter 1 . 7/20/2019 What the hell is going on? I am reading chapter 1 right? |
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 4/28/2019 Good Christmas. |
Olly chapter 1 . 1/16/2019 Ron... In Ravenclaw ? ... Is there any other Ron I don't know about apart from Weasley ? Because you can't seriously saying that Ron Weasley is a Ravenclaw right ? Is there any character who isn't so ooc that he is barely recognizable ? |
6She6Devil6 chapter 1 . 1/8/2019 You seriously need to work on your grammar and punctuation. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2018 Your story looks really good, so I don't why someone added you that community. I saw it in there when she was making fun of another author. I liked the first chapter a lot, so I hope you aren't taking it seriously. |
scrappy8 chapter 15 . 12/1/2018 great chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2018 How come every one thinks that James and Lily, who died to protect their only child will forget about one child when they have twins and leave him to be abused is beyond me. And Petunia and Vernon treating another child who was left by his own parents as their own! |
HeartsGlow chapter 1 . 12/2/2018 It's great that you wanted to do something different, but the start is not so good. Too many loopholes and missing events/years, you need to flesh things out instead of describing soda that wasn't even around in 1995 (Coke Zero didn't come out until 2005). You skipped all those years that would make a wonderful story themselves. There is just too much jumping around and skipping things. Why is Harry's middle name Robert anyway? |
Rori Potter chapter 15 . 12/1/2018 Amazing! |
WhiteElfElder chapter 15 . 12/1/2018 Where did the Emperor go if he is no longer bound in the heart? |
Son of Whitebeard chapter 15 . 12/1/2018 ooh nice family time |
scrappy8 chapter 14 . 11/27/2018 great chapter |
WhiteElfElder chapter 14 . 11/27/2018 Bella does not know where to draw the line with the magics used, it just shows how insane she is. I think even Joker would find her too over the edge for his liking. |