Aww! Lovely.

While I find this story to be interesting. The way it's written makes it hard to know whose talking or where the scene is transitioning to. Keep up the good work.

Reading this gave me an idea for a story. Where an orphan Naruto has an Accelerator quirk and he has been send to a special institute for those with 'unique' quirks and becomes more similar to dark Naruto as a result. Not sure whether to make him join hero academia willingly or being forced to by a ex-famous hero Jiraiya who believes they will need Minato's kid in heroes side in the future.

Might put it as a challenge. Or if anyone wants to write it please PM me.

Honestly if you go back to the very beginning of the MHA manga, you would see that Mt Lady actually just made her debut. I just assumed that this was one of your AUs

Great start to the story, but could you separate the dialogue lines from the rest of the paragraph? Everything's kind of jumbled together and it looks messy. Other than that I love the story's premise.

Mount lady couldnt have been there. She was a new hero that was just starting out when the show began.

Mt Lady is 22 years old at the start of the series according to the wiki.

Not a bad start wonder what is his quirk that green shield was it energy was it some mental thing. One non issue I thought mount lady didn’t appear on the scene until Dekus time. Anyway looking out for more

Sorry it changed my word in the review to. Mount Lady or Yu Takeyama was the one who lifted the ceiling

well this is not bad at all I will continue reading this e-e

Good start can’t really say more than that because it’s only the first chapter and what happened was just prologue basically so I am looking forward to the next one.

Hey sorry some stuff words were taken out for some reason the one who lifted the ceiling was i wil fix these issues later.