Reviews for A Father's Duty |
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BorderLand chapter 5 . 10/19/2019 So Jaune is demi-god, heck considering who his grandfather and father are calling him demigod is not quite accurate. More like a god that is mortal and that's all. I hope the sequel is pairing him with Ruby considering his semblance and hidden powers unknown origins thing they have in common it would fit. |
yesboss21 chapter 5 . 10/15/2019 OH DAMN FORSHADOWING, when is the next book? |
yesboss21 chapter 4 . 10/15/2019 Jaune Arc Grandson of Kratos*jumps back to the Canon...that explains a lot |
yesboss21 chapter 3 . 10/15/2019 Stop the fight! I SAID STOP THE FIGHT, DAAAMMMNNNNN can i get an update or a hello? And also, I wonder what kind of bone breaking training that Jaune did when he was young without his Aura |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/12/2019 Very interesting... Please update soon |
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 2 . 3/29/2019 Looks like Atreus took a long bit of his father if this is the Atreus I know although I haven't played GOW. But even so. This was tense. It looks like Jaune's secret is out but one thing is for damn sure. He is one hell of a fighter. And Ozpin is right. He got potential and qualities others don't have. But even so, this is interesting. Jaune's family is indeed more a curse than a blessing. That all asides, I look forward to more of this. Saluut. |
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 Read the six chapters. Damn good stuff I gotta admit. Weird I never heard from you. Read over this thing and admiring the hell out of this fic. Did a really good job. With Jaune, you picked one part out of it but even so, there are better options for him. But the fight was a good part and I can't wait till he stands his ground against his dad. That all asides. Your grammar is good and it looks like you have a lot of experience. This is gonna be fun. Saluut. |
Malgrath chapter 5 . 2/21/2019 Fuck that blue-haired shit stain |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2019 PLEASE UPDATE THE RED KNIGHT |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2019 Nice fic but plz update Red Knight |
royalmary chapter 5 . 1/12/2019 this was soooooo good! I'm so excited and eager to see more! I hope you continue writing this storyline. |
death'sgodson1224-DGS chapter 1 . 1/1/2019 Does this make Jaune a godling of two patheons or three? |
Arsao Tome chapter 5 . 12/11/2018 I so want to say, Kratos is Jaune's Grandfather. |
HanKanoya chapter 5 . 12/8/2018 MORE PLEASE! |
write n wrong chapter 5 . 12/8/2018 this was a great story , can't wait for the sequel , a lot of people complain about jaune , both in fanfics and canon , so here is my opinion , characters like jaune make any series worth watching because of their faults , its so people can relate , an all perfect character is boring , so what if jaune lied to get in beacon , ozpin no doubt knew that but saw jaune 's potential and his interaction with weiss in the beginning , complete misunderstanding with both parties but that was among one of interesting things about rwby , heck , it wouldn't surprise me if during season 6 or in a future season , weiss asks jaune out and he rejects her , keep up the good work :) |