this story would be great if there was no sasusaku in it. Even when I go out of my way to read something about Hinata that pink girl is found in it. I mean I like how the teams are dynamic with team 7 having Hinata and team eight shockingly getting along but I honestly thought this was a sasunaruhina fanfic but whatever.

It just amazes me how many Naruto fans/writers don't know the Hyuga have a small blind spot in the back of their heads, they don't see 360 degrees. It is mentioned when Kidomaru was shooting arrows at Neji in the Sasuke Retrieval Arc.

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you know that by changing the teams and then STILL sticking to canon isn't a great way to get readers don't you? Hell so far this is almost a straight up rip off of the original story which isn't the point of fanfiction your supposed to change things up to make it more interesting not just keep following canon without any real changes. If this doesn't change in a chapter or two I'm not going to bother reading anymore as there's absolutely no point as if I wanted to I could just read the manga and imagine Hinata being in Sakura's place and that would basically be this story lol

Troutman30 You need to read the manga because your delusions have no place here.

Troutman30 After all these years it still baffles me that morons claim to have read the manga never actually have. SasuSaku was planned and developed from the beginning. Get over it.

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Nice story. The characters don't feel off, and the divergences you have made are interesting. I hope you update soon.

Nice first exam !

Can't wait for the next issue or chapter? idk, i hope your doing okay... Please don't have the corona virus.

I read a lot of fanfiction about Hinata being on team 7 but this one is the best I read so far, I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work :)

Hinata’s introduction seems a bit too long and bold for her at this point. Would she really say anything obviously negative about her clan to her bran new team?
“Why? Why doesn’t he show me any appreciation?” Um… would Hinata have the self-confidence to think that she merits appreciation? Did I miss something about where your starting her character development?

Yes, I know I’m a negative ninny, sorry.

After all these years this Sasu/Saku pairing baffles me. There never was a Sasu/Saku until after the Fourth Shinobe War, Sasuke wanted nothing to do with Sakura or Ino and Karen was only useful for her ability to sense Chakra and healing.
The final pairings, Sasu/Saku and the rest were just a set up for new characters in the Borito manga.

As disgusted as I am with most Hinata on Team 7 stories, this is probably one of the very few ways to make the ending ships make sense.

But I still despise Hinata and NaruHina so I won't be reading further. (Yes, I did read the summary.)

Good luck writing.

I like the story so far, hopefully with winter break you can work on it more, but dont push yourself too hard, the frequency of the stories isnt what makes it good, it's the quality of the stories