Reviews for Summer's Shadow
xbox432 chapter 11 . 7/3
complain about Christ being - since when did Kid Win become the Messiah?
But given they are just shouting at each other and no gun has been fired yet - But... hearing two gunshots is what brought them to the warehouse in the first place?
caused all males members - caused all male members
sonic chapter 10 . 11/29/2019
Good Chapter!
Hexenbiest chapter 3 . 10/5/2019
"What causes a person to trigger a Master Power as opposed to a Breaker Power?"

Master trigger events involve isolation, alienation, exile and/or betrayal.
Breaker trigger events have physical and mental elements that are indivisibly linked.
Shin1gam1 chapter 9 . 9/16/2019
So... no Sophia?
Noneofit chapter 2 . 9/9/2019
Since you asked, people get master powers from social isolation and alienation. People get breaker powers from mental and physical stresses that come from a contradiction that cannot be resolved.

A breaker trigger: imagine you define yourself as a “survivor” and hate when people don’t fight back, even if they will die if they don’t. Now imagine you’re in a situation where want to fight because you’re a “survivor” but in a situation where the only way to survive is to run. The two are mutually incompatible and you survive physically but suffer mentally.

That’s a breaker trigger.

Taylor also had a thinker component from facing a longstanding issue that couldn’t be resolved.
MegaCharizard'm chapter 9 . 9/8/2019
This is really awesome, I really like the way you've taken the story I don't think I've seen it before. Though why exactly does someone have planned powers and Tardis powers together?
xbox432 chapter 9 . 9/8/2019
I don't think either of us was talking about the punishment Carol would give her daughter, but the punishment the PRT/Protectorate would issue. Victoria DID just assault and nearly kill one of their Wards after all.

As for the chapter, WTF? I'm pretty confused, but I'm willing to wait for context clues in further chapters.
tarrangar chapter 9 . 9/6/2019
Why would the punishment be from Carol? Glory Girl attacked a Ward, that's legal action stuff, I expect Glory Girl to be dragged to court, and at minimum have to temporarily enter the Wards on probation(probably a 3-6 month probation, whereupon she can quit and return to New Wave) attacking a Ward is serious, and Worm isn't a setting where hero versus hero violence due to misunderstandings, are just brushed off.
tarrangar chapter 8 . 9/6/2019
I hope Glory Girl is in some serious trouble, attacking a Ward is not exactly a minor offense.
Angelfusion chapter 9 . 9/6/2019
To clarify, In my last comment I knew she was just pinning blame. I was just saying that I hope once amy has had some time to calm down and think about it that she realizes she was being overly harsh (Though she may blame her a little).
Jordisk chapter 8 . 8/22/2019
Anger issues? Like those Sophia had in canon? Shard Influence Detected!
xbox432 chapter 8 . 8/21/2019
...I'm kinda hoping that there are actually some consequences for Vicky this go around. Maybe her learning that she can't get off scot-free for all her actions might actually help her mature earlier than usual. I mean, I can UNDERSTAND why Amy could be angry and why Vicky could jump the gun like that. But that doesn't mean that it should be swept under the rug. I'll be curious to see how you play out that interaction.

Lastly, I kinda wonder if Taylor will get a handle on Armsmaster's personality? She seems to get that he's socially awkward, so I'm curious if she will be like most others and avoid interactions with him or if she'll try to make accommodations? Maybe she could buy him a rattleback as a Christmas present? He might enjoy studying the physics of it.
Angelfusion chapter 8 . 8/21/2019
seems a bit harsh on panaceas side considering she was being kidnapped by a teleporer. Especially considering how much at fault glorygirl was and how much trouble glorygirl would get in. Hopefully she calms down soon and shes just mad from the pain of the bullet wound.
aleguille chapter 8 . 8/21/2019
why did yoy nerf taylor power so much, does she have a secret subpower or something this just seemes like ss power but way weaker
AnimeA55Kicker chapter 8 . 8/21/2019
Not sure Pancea is justified in hating Taylor just for that. And is GG going to catch any shit for harming a ward?
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