Wow. Incredible

Im crying this story is too good! Its simply one of the best things you have written and one of the best things I have ever read.

It was so cute and adorable, Im happy that Sirius was finally able to cross over and meet James, Reggie and all the others.

There is no doubt this is one of the stories I will be reading at least a hundred times ((or more, who knows)) and if I dont succeed I wont cross over before I have.

Sorry kinda lost track here...

It was an amazing story ((as always)) your writing is beautiful and your ideas are the best!

Lots of love as I hope you will continue to do this in all eternity :D 3

Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #9

Examiner: Angel

Grade: 19/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback: "This was better than I expected! I felt that everyone was in character, even with the setting used. The scene stating that Reg wouldn't be coming back to the grave gave me so many feels. It was executed wonderfully. I could picture everything, feel everything, and that's because of the masterpiece you've created here. It was original inside and out. I have no other words. The interactions felt so vividly realistic, I could have been watching this like a movie. Seriously. Even with the word count being large, you still managed to keep things smooth and fluid throughout the fic. The transitions between the prose and dialogue had no bumps or abruptness in it. The task is completed and the prompt was used so uniquely. Sirius was most definitely stuck ;)This plot gave me everything. You left nothing to question on honestly, and the story was paced nicely. There was no rushing in this fic, and it ended with a sense of completion. It gave me feels, and any other wolfstar reader should get some feels too. I think a general audience would even like something like this. SPaG is on point. Nothing I saw that needed to be pointed out. While you did provide the right information in your note, the story is way beyond word count lol. Still, amazing work, Liza. Seriously!"

That was a awesome story it made me cry love it

I really liked your story! Especially it's metaphysical and religious aspect. Plot, characters, relationships and connections between past and present were also very well-written.

I really liked your story! Especially because of it's metaphysical and religious aspect. Characters, relationship and connections between past and present were also very well-written.

That's adorable.

I am DEAD. So many emotions right now.

Firstly, I absolutely loved this. It's broken my heart but in the best way. I loooooove the ghost/human genre and all the bittersweetness attached. I also liked that it wasn't just about the romance - Sirius had to get his own peace before he could cross over.

HOPE! *SOBBING* As soon as you said "genetic disorder" I knew it was going to happen, but I was SHOOK when she came to the graveyard and casually greets Sirius. Poor, poor, poor Remus! I loved the line where Sirius promised they'd sit with her that night. My heart! That was such a great detail with Sirius being able to touch/interact with them in their last days.

And the line about the two gay ghosts haunting the graveyard was great!

REMUS GOT THE SPACE NEXT TO HIM. I am dead. I am also headcanoning that Teddy takes over as the groundskeeper (if I read that right, he must still be alive?)

I also loved that Remus wanted to make sure falling in love with a ghost isn't a sin just in case. I liked the positive nod towards religion here - especially in a gay ghost love story lmao. Like Sirius said, there's still brightness in the world. AND I loved the little Draco/Charlie mention!

THANK YOU! *HEART*

Aww. This was sad in the fact they both died and poor Sirius was stuck for so long. I’m really glad they got to be together in the end though. Remus was afraid Sirius would leave him and then Sirius was terrified after Remus passed that they’d never see one another again. I loved it. Your stories give such life to the characters no matter the setting or circumstances. Beautiful.

it was amazing!

And now I'm a crying mess.

That was absolutely lovely.
I loved it alot. I loved the way it flowed
I loved the emotion.
It was really really good
You're writing never ceases too amaze me

Awww! This was so sweet!
I loved the way you told this story. It was just perfect.