Reviews for The Ultimate and the Widow |
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N.W.A chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 [Verse 1: Dr. Dre] I got a taste for waste and a taste and a blood Murder I heard her when she screamed the "Drop!" 'Cause her son caught the slug Relate this to no choice And listen to this straight-up man before they ban the voice While I rhyme to the rhythm of a pop Remember the first nigga that runs is the first to get shot Whoever said that what I say and portray is negativity Need to come kick it in the city with me And find the black and crack de fact And take that shit back 'Cause they don't wanna fuck with that There's too many niggas they're tryin' to calm If mothafuckaz could get it, nobody would've fuck with it Appetite for destruction For him to get a bit more shit he gotta commit Murder in the first degree and manslaughter Takin' the life of his wife and young daughter A whole city of bitches that look sucked up And the niggas is killin', it's straight fucked up Whoever sayin' what I'm sayin is for greed Then I ain't even what they're tryin' to feed My appetite for destruction "You guys know who I'm talkin' to" [Verse 2: MC Ren] The appetite is tremendous, so I'm gonna spin this Drop up some violence because they ask me to end this Some trouble that I cought 'cause I was noisy A nigga tried to take advantage because of the kamikaze He took a swing for my head, thought I was faded Start runnin' for the door but the fucker never made it The sound of the 9 went bang And all over the wall was his mothafuckin' brain 'Cause I'm a nigga you can't sleep on So set the alarm, 'cause I hit like a mothafuckin' bomb I do damage with the 9 in my hand But the average nigga that don’t know me don’t understand I'm from the streets, so therefore You know I don't care for a sucker that ain't down With the real niggas, the niggas, the niggas Yo, and after when the shit gotta go ain't even sober Any time that the 9 wanna leave I got a .38 hidden up the sleeve And it's ready to go to war 'cause that's what it's here for I shoot down a million niggas and shoot one more And that's the million and one, they couldn't hang with the appetite, 'cause they wasn't rappin' right So I had to destroy whoever was standin' in my presence For fuckin' up the essence – appetite for destruction [Interlude] "Cops put a hurtin' on yo' ass, man You know, they really degrade you White folks don't believe that shit They don't believe that cops degrade you [Imitating white person] Oh come on, those people, those people are resisting arrest." [Verse 3: Eazy-E] Check it out, y'all, in the house, y'all So I can show and flow and let the people know So won't you ease on down to the yellow brick road To Compton, but first let me tell you somethin' I possess the 10 commandments of the hip-hop thugsta Known as the thief and murderer First one – honor thy nigga with an attitude Gotta get respect or break your mothafuckin' neck Second one – always gotta fuck out of wedlock I like it when the pussy goes snap, crackle and pop Number three – I'm a gangsta fanatic I smoke any fools tryna 'cause some static Number four – here's what's in store A crazy-ass nigga that remains hardcore Fifth one – my kill has just begun I pull out my gun, that'll keep me on the run Step six – hmmm, it's kinda tricky Can't forget that I'm mothafuckin' chicken-shit To the ones who tries to play the E By the time you get to seven, you'll be six feet deep Number eight – make no mistake Move real sneaky and you're bound to catch your prey Ninth one – I gotta be raw Fuck any brainwashin' man-made law! Last but not least, I must be real Number ten – is my appetite to ki– |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2019 Awful |
Aspiring-Creator chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 Okay there's this which I really don't want to criticize due to this fic's purpose of being made as a tribute to Stan Lee and so with that in mind, I'm going to separate those two right now. I am not criticizing the tribute itself. In fact, I'd say that it was rather nice to see a tribute to Mr. Lee. But once you separate those two and look at the story itself? This again, feels like a rejected chapter for a harem except unlike Heartbroken Devil and probably the next one I'll be covering, The Tamaranean Comfort where it feels like they were rejected drafts for chapters from Sonic's Ultimate Harem? This feels like it was a rejected draft for Shadow's Chaotic Harem and needless to say while I'm again appreciative of the intent? This story does not work. Starting off with the summary, you'd think this would be a more romantic affair with Black Widow gradually developing feelings for Shadow over time with the two talking and dating, maybe a better writer even throws in a written Stan Lee cameo for the hell of it, I mean I don't want to criticize a story for what it didn't give me but I couldn't help but think about this stuff when I saw the summary and actually delving into the story? It's basically a chapter of Chaotic Harem just turned into a one-shot. The characters are cardboard cut-outs, the sex is expected and boring, good for a quick wank and not much more though honestly the more I look at these and how the sex is written I'm really wondering what the hell I saw in these scenes and the dialogue is janky as all hell. If this was made to convince me to make mine Marvel? I would immediately do a u-turn and go to DC for this is just bland and pathetic. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 Beautiful! Stan Lee would be honored to read this tribute |
JaySonic1995 chapter 1 . 11/19/2018 Amazing oneshot story of ShadowxWidow and yes R.I.P. Stan the Man Lee you will be missed |
sonic vs evil chapter 1 . 11/19/2018 is perfect and his memory is why I asked you to accept some of the marvel chics for the sonic harem my comment, if he rest in peace and we will see one last time in the movie avengers 4 have their ready cameo and I'll wait for it with zeal it was an ispiracion and his legacy will be something for which we will always enjoy EXCELSIOR |
TienMaD chapter 1 . 11/19/2018 One thing I should be respect about this fanfic’s true purpose:...Stan Lee will always be in our hearts as a great memorable hero. By the way, nice story of Shadow with Widow. |