Reviews for The Beholder
Spazzman29 chapter 1 . 9/12
Harry/Luna isn't in my top five pairings for Harry but I do thing they should have been canon (Instead of shoving Ginny down our throats. Rowling can't write romance as all canon pairings suck). The Slug Club party would have been the perfect place to start their relationship and could have been cultivated from there.
watchingbutterflies chapter 1 . 9/7
This was just super adorable and cute omg thanks for sharing! I loved Harry and Luna’s characterisation and they way they interacted so lightly and beautiful. Only tip is that I think you used loose instead of lose e.g to see Luna lose her cool is more grammatically correct than loose her cool. But that doesn’t take away from how sweet this story was, especially that convo between Dumbledore and Harry.
Dovahcrap chapter 1 . 6/28
One of the most entertaining and warmhearted Lunarry story I have ever read. I was smiling from ear to ear throughout the story, and I was really glad that it was the last story I read before hitting the hay. You have made Harry act like a hormonal love-struck teenager which was refreshing from the serious broody Harry. Luna, on the other hand, is so sweet and endearing. A lot of stories write Luna as an overly crazy or weird character that it instantly puts me off from reading the rest of the story. So I'm really glad that you made Luna, Luna, with a hefty amount of adorable.

I also really find Dumbledore and Harry's discussion of love very moving. I agree with everything you've written about love. It such a powerful feeling that can make you or break you. It is indeed as special as it is common. Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. That scene alone made the story much more meaningful and uplifting. From the bottom of my heart, thank you. Thank you for sharing with us an incredible story about love. It's a beautiful story. I will certainly read your story again and feel the emotions you've put in it. I hope you're doing well, and I wish you the best. Take care and stay safe. Au revoir!
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 3/7
Loved it
dennisud chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
A nice one-shot that IMHO was cute and hit the mark as the author wanted.
Scabbers1957 chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
Aw what a sweet little flick, some I'm a big Harry and Luna fan, I'll add this to my Haruna community.
Well done by the way.
:))
Sorceress of Magic chapter 2 . 1/20/2019
So cute
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
Honestly they are just too adorable together. Great job, writer!
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018
This was awesome
Kamiccola chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
OMG so cute!
MagisterWriter chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Great job, nothing to comment on this work. I just want you to know that it is superb. Keep up the good work.
penpeny chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
Very sweet story.
And I absolutely adored the little jokes, made me laugh many a time. :)
pokemanik671 chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
Great story
Darththorn chapter 1 . 11/19/2018
Wonderful.

10/10 A etc.
Valiryo chapter 1 . 11/19/2018
This was great, seriously this pairing should have been canon.