Reviews for Fate Laoch
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2/2019
Whereeeeee theeeeeee updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Nemris chapter 7 . 6/20/2019
SERVANTS! its- its SERVANTS!
Väinämöinen, I knew it! I have to say he is a very good character as a servant submission.
I see we have that 8th Master-Servant pair.
Keep up the good work.
reven228 chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Oh man we got some awesome summons this chapter, but above all that I'm just glad we got another chapter! Great job as usual, I can't wait for the next one, keep goin and stay golden
Images of the Lost chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Nani, an update!
LunaRose2468 chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Woohoo! My OC has finally been introduced! You did a great job with her, and I can’t wait to see what else you do with her _
Lagstabbing devil chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Yes! Caster is finally here, and he is written exactly as I pictured him. Good job. Can't wait to see him in real action.

And that 8th servant really surprised me, but damn if I'm not looking forward to what other twists you will bring.
tobi-is-an-artist-too chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
WOOHOO! NICE JOB ZIGGY! THAT WAS AWEOSME! And such a fun ride! It's a real shame Elaine couldn't use that chunk of wood herself but I'm hoping Quinn would use that piece instead. It's a big hope but let me hope damn it. And of course Narc is the one to get songs sung about her hahaha. I can see them being a pair that melds well together. I don't understand why Dylan is pissed Berserker is a damn power house. Though makes me wonder if he's gonna use that Madness nhancment thing that makes em stronger yet more insane. That would really suck for that poor girl who clearly needs a hug. AND THEN WE GOT ISAAC ROLLING IN WITH THE SERVANT INTERCEPTION. That's one way to make an entrance! Unless he's popped up before and I just forget...Still awesome! Poor Johnny though lost a servant and a pretty badass one at that. Though...maybe I should be saying poor Grace. Girl did get her beck slashed and all, hopefully she won't die. Actually I'm sure she won't. But still, damn. This was one hell of a chapter zig But we still got some servants to see! And man am I excited!
DeathTheManiac chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Welcome back!

We have Vainamoinen as caster, and while I don't know much about him, I do remember that he was a flirt in the stories. And a powerhouse if you take some of the poems literally. His demeanor is how I would picture him being.

Berserker is a mystery to me. She could be a genderbent character, but if not then I have no clue. Women who became berserkers are rare in mythology. Sure she could be a monster but this is not FGO.

And Isaac got Jeanne. Or at least the servant has the same appearance as Jeanne Alter.

Oh, I can't wait to see how these servants duke it out.
RedRat8 chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Huh, my guy was attacked and now a dangerous Servant ended up in the hands of a guy that's clearly not all there. I have a strong feeling he's going to be the Reika, Shinji, or Ryuunosuke of the war. But that's just me I suppose.
ZenoZen chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
welcome back and looks like elaine time to shine maybe in next chapter, im wondering what the rest of the servant that will get summoned. See you next time and berserker is definitely a power house
PainX65 chapter 7 . 6/17/2019
Hey! Fate Laoch! Welcome back Zagi :D
Haha, being attached is very understandable. It's gonna be tough, eh?

Starting off with Narcisse and her summon, Vainamoinen! Caster! Whoa. I actually know a little about this guy (more so the voice), he's definitely an interesting summon for Caster class. One who is too fashionable for her own good and the other who is kinda a flirt in a way. They make for a nice master-servant duo.

Now Dylan, hot damn. So that necklace was Berserker? That's very interesting. Dragon too? Cool. Wonder who she is in legend. My first though was a younger Tiamat, but that can't be it, besides Tiamat's hair is more blue. Hmm, but seeing how it was guarded by Chimera and all things, as well as her being Berserker. I'm going to say she's Echnida. Dylan is definitely not happy, but you can't always have what you want.

Time for Elaine's servant. Oh? Seems he has some magical artefact that allows him to track someone? Seems she did take a Lancer catalyst. Ah, good ol' dad! Thanks to that memory, he faltered and now Elaine might get a Lancer! Woo! Good to see that Quinn still has a little bit of care towards Elaine (if that's the case). Guess the only way to find out is the next chapter, eh?

Johnny's turn, or it should've been when that attack got underway, by an Isaac? Whoa! An 8th master and 8th servant are mixed into the fray now too? I did not see that coming, but I like it all the same! Nice work keeping that underwraps. It turned out to be a nice surprise (i wonder if they're True Servant or Avenger/Alter) either way, nice job Zagi. Very proud. Good luck with the next chapter, you can do it. :D
tobi-is-an-artist-too chapter 6 . 2/5/2019
FLIGHT BUDDIES! (Figured I'd review since all I did was go straight to the theories channel :D)

Oh also I don't care what anybody says Kizuna is totally playing Narc. I'm sure she knows exactly who she is and she knows who Dylan is too. Or...maybe I'm just giving her way too much credit.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/4/2019
seems like saber version of giles de rias will be summoned
ZenoZen chapter 6 . 2/4/2019
Thank to this chapter i can see lots of the master fought in the war for selfish motive
PainX65 chapter 6 . 2/3/2019
Yee. Opening up with Joesph and he had prior connections to Elaine it seems. Hard to say whether he's more of a friend, or someone who has feelings for her, hard to say for now. Both his family and Elaine's family are connected, so this probably gives Elaine some possible advantages in the war (though nothing was said about it, and it would probably be done by him rather than her). So far, Joesph's personality doesn't really fit with how Grace said he was, which means he changed over time and has a facade (or at least work personality). If we're going by Joesph having feelings for Elaine, I don't really see Elaine returning them with how she acted around him at the beginning, and they seem to be more like friends (if that does happen of course), of course, Grace's words will probably play into their relation somewhat, like Elaine seeing the true Joesph that works for the Church. Though, repeating myself, things Joesph has done this chapter (with Elaine) like remembering the horse thing, might suggest romantic feelings.

Next with have Narcisse on a plane or rather airport, and immediately thinking of last chapter planes airports Kizuna. She doesn't want others to worry about her master status, which makes sense why she left her group with the kraken without a word (though obvious to us readers). And it seems her big family are the type to all come down and hang out XD. Her catalyst is a kantele, music. Music would probably mean Caster. Hmm, crazy guy with a bow in arrow? Hmm, unsure if reference to another master or just a real crazy guy. Yep, thought of airport Kizuna proved to be true. Gotta say, there interaction was nice. Gonna be a shame when they enter the war. But most importantly...AIR BUDDIES! \o/

The man looking at them might be that crazy bow man. Perhaps Dylan? Yep, it was Dylan. And last chapter they said that Corbin was bad lol.

Speaking of which, we get to him now. Looking for Bridget and trying to keep away from other magi. Seems the start of their conversation is a bit tense or rather awkward. Two mages from the Clock Tower having to battle it out brutally, would make pre-talks hard. Seems Bridget was more avoiding. Seems he got her talking with being allies, or perhaps lies, who knows? But what I can say is that their conversation was a delight to read, hard to put my finger on it, but it was more what's the word, classy? I dunno. It held a different air between them than the others so far.

Now the end of the chapter, we have Johnny and Grace, and since Aramis is mentioned here. It would imply that one of them is an enforcer. Burnt scrap of white cloth, but has pure anger and hatred coming from it. Berserker? Prolly Berserker. And it came from a Saint? Interesting. Actually, that kind of makes sense, I was about to joke about it, but that joke actually solidified the Berserker theory. Kukuku. Supposed to be a she too? Hmm. Gotta think about it.

Next chapter! Servants? 3-4! So excited :D
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