Please continue. I can not wait

Pleaseeee update

l find nothing wrong with your writing, it's so good...you're an amazing writer. x

Ugh, be quiet Bloom... -_- You clearly don't... l seriously can't stand you... No Flora, where'd you go? Come back please baby.

As usual, Amazing chapter as always. x

No Flora! :(

NOOOO FLORA! My baby! :( HELIA WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!

Wow! Amazing chapter, and Flora is mysterious... baby what's on going with you?!

I hope you can quickly find Beta and you will continue the story. I really like it and look forward to another chapter :)

I am very curious to continue. I hope Flora will not be gone for a long time. I do not understand why she actually left. Continue soon please.

The chapter is ridiculously short. It's not a turn off yet, but what seriously turned me away from continuing is the lack of detail and too many POVs. Not really a good start. Hopefully you'll take it as constructive criticism and not think it's "hate" or whatever.

Oh, you hold us in tension :) I'm curious about that mystery. Continue soon please

omg this chapter is sooo good! pls update more!

Love it! Continue please

Ok... I guess? Anyways, I really like your story! And also your fast update (hope you always do this)!

Oh my God! That was good! It's a pity that the chapter was so short, but it's great that you're updating so soon. Otherwise, I like Caspian. I imagine him as Prince Caspian of Narnia :)