I admit, I thought this fic was going with the idea of Carol being an only child when she was asking about Lori's siblings. It was a heartwarming fic and I'm hoping the site will have some more Carol-centered fics in the future.

This is very sweet, a nice, heartwarming moment between the two friends

This was just a pure story. I loved how you portrayed Lori and Carol’s friendship. When you revealed Carol’s true intentions you felt genuinely sad for her. Lori comforting Carol perfectly captured Lori’s big sister nature. Great job on putting your spin on Carol and giving Lori a sweet role as not just a good sister but a good friend as well.

This story is just a reminder of how good a sister and friend Lori can truly be. Exemplary as always.

Lovely imagery; from the description of the Autumn whether in the beginning to the sights and ambience of the shopping mall. And it’s good to see a story about Lori’s friendship with Carol, one that develops Carol’s personality and that manages to fit in some heartwarming Loud family shenanigans as well.

Great stoy, mate! :)

You already got my comments one on one, but for posterity, I'll leave a review here saying that this was really touching. It's always good to read about a fleshed out Carol with actual thought and effort put into her, and I thank you for doing that. Not to mention, this was just a great read. I especially loved the scene with Lisa and Lori writing and reading a story for Lily. But trust me, the ending was great too.

Thanks again

"How dare you? The computer simply co-wrote it."

Top 10 sentences in a fanfic we wish were part of an official show, movie, etc.

Besides that, when I read the title of this story, I thought it would have something to do with Clyde's relationship with Lincoln. Now I've re-learned to read the dang summary before I jump to conclusions. XD

But anyway, this was a nice, simple story.

Keep up the good work. :)

Awww, cute bonding one here.