Reviews for My Hero Academia What If- Just Let me Try
Aryk von Straln chapter 2 . 8/2/2019
So I hate to say it so bluntly here but this is pretty boring. To explain a bit: you are just regurgitating canon back at us with slightly altered dialogue. The only character who's showing any real change in these events is Izuku and even then we have no idea what exactly what you've changed about him aside from becoming a less abrasive version of Bakugo (cocksure, mouthy, ect.) while still maintaining enough of himself to not be a complete OC.

But that's the thing, if you change the central character so drastically then there needs to be SOME trickle down effect here. I mean obviously someone like Ochako, who doesn't know Izuku until UA, won't be affected but Bakugo? If Izuku is confident enough, and strong enough, to just casually pick him up and hang Bakugo upside down by his ankle with one hand with a snarky quip...why is he still treating Izuku like he's "Deku"?

Personally I'd say you need to try and slow the pacing down just a hair. Give us some chapters with some original content to at least give us some context to explain the changes you've implemented. Do some world building so that we don't just end up reading about caricatures going through the motions instead of actual characters with believable motivations and goals (for a given value of believable considering the possible pairings, didn't see if you said it would be a harem anywhere but you did have Ochako and Momo listed at least)
gwb620 chapter 2 . 4/26/2019
Excellent chapter
Xerzo LotCN chapter 2 . 3/17/2019
why did he only get 10 that doesnt make sense were people kill stealing him that bad or are you overly nerfing him?
i figured at least the very lowest would be 25 or 33 probably way higher like maybe even more then the mid ranks like 40s or 50s or maybe even close to bakugou in the 60s 70s with a easy base percent of 20 and some great training both physically and combative he should be on par or ahead of the average at least top 5 all round?
welp whatever it doesnt make sense but at least he got 80 rescue points for flawless saving waifu and took first place im hoping you let him do better later as that poorly doesnt make sense with how much he is improved vs canon it be cool if he did super if he did well on quirk exam or like class pre with momo as vp she is a waifu?

speaking of waifus pairing it seems nice and im looking forward to it but is it just ochako and momo or will any more be added later as they show up im all for that like mei or more waifus etc
Guest chapter 2 . 3/10/2019
Pretty good
Ezylryb chapter 2 . 1/24/2019
Great chapter looking forward to reading the next one. I loved the IzuOcha moments.
Cyde chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
This - even if the pacing is somewhat rushed - is what I'm talking about.

There seems to be an idea in this fandom that the heart of a hero and the willingness to stand up for one's self are mutually exclusive. This premise goes a long way toward dispelling that dangerously incorrect notion. Kudos.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
I love this story already!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
This looks like it will be good. Looking forward to the next chapter.
LD 1449 chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
OOC ness, borderline fanwank/bashing, a lack of nuance and realism to side characters and a hint of the mary-sue tropes.

I'm sorry to say, you've stepped on practically every possible "don't do this" landmine you could have in two chapters.
Draconic king chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
Yeab BOIIIIIIIIIIII!
HankFlamion18 chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
Man, I LOVE IT! THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I NEED! OH THANK YOU! THANK YOU! That being said, this chapter, kinda felt a tad bit rushed. There were a couple errors here and there, and you messed up OFA with AFO only once. I'm surprised he can use 20% but what surprised me more was that 100% barely caused him any harm. I think one of those numbers should be altered, as they should be closer to each other, his easily accessible strength, and his max burst. Also, is he using Full Cowl? or just focusing it? Really, thank you for writing this, I can't wait for more.
LoverOfArtemis chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
I hope you don't take too long to update this story again. I can't wait for Momo to be introduced.
bigrig56 chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
...He was the first one to enter the battle zone and he only acquired 5 points, even if he didn't take out robots that other people were fighting he should have gotten more than that.
dspendragon125 chapter 2 . 1/17/2019
YeY. Great, can't wait for more.
Chopper911 chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
Nice beginning, cant wait for more :) Great job, keep it up :)
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