Reviews for Lady Lucks Favor
Phantom Frost chapter 11 . 8/14
Loved this chapter hot goth girls like sam are awesome but its hard to beat a HOT and sexy punk rocker like ember especially since thats my preference in a girl hopefully you update soon since i love this fic
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13
Hey man, don’t worry about that other guest that told you to stop writing. While yes your story could use some editing, it’s still great. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Stay safe.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/13
Really hope Ember comes back. She’s my favorite to pair with Danny.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7
Your spelling is atrociously bad. Stop writing.
Alex chapter 11 . 8/6
Oh man nice chapter I can see the ghost king prophecy coming out in Danny meaning that the girls like Desiree are starting to genuinely fall for him I where it will head in the future Danny with a harem of wives both human and ghost I also get the sense jazz is next since incest is no taboo among ghosts I hope you update the next chapter soon I wanna see more when you got time and also when is paulina gonna get in on the action we had star where is paulina lol seriously hurry with the next chapter lol just kidding take your time you know what I mean
Guest chapter 11 . 8/4
Do kitty and Jazz next
Danfan1
Wingd knight chapter 11 . 8/4
I'm gonna split this review into two parts, part one isn't really about his chapter but I still want to say whats in it:

1) I know that it is probably way past the time to be making requests for the non-cannon chapters but I still want to pitch some groups of girls since the last break was on a sixth chapter. From Young Justice season 1- Miss Martian, Artemis, Zatanna, and Rocket- from DC Comicsthe two younger Batgirls Stephanie Brown and Cassandra Cain OR the female Kryptonians Powergirl and Supergirl OR the Teen Titan girls Starfire, Terra, Raven, Donna Troy, and Aquagirl (Lorena Marquez). From Disney, Alex and Juliett from Wizards of Waverly Place.

Now the part that actually has to do with this chapter and the story as a whole
2) This chapter was pretty damn good both plot and smut wise though there were some errors in homonyms and just those little things that just make you have that small itch in the back of your head like 'wait, did I read that right?' even though the actual words flow correctly. Regardless this was a very enjoyable chapter to a pretty good story that deserves more attention than it has been getting from Danny Phantom fans.
I would ask if the next chapter could come out faster- like before the end of the month- but coming from me that would be really hypocritical and really I understand that slow work is still work especially on hobby work like this stuff so I'll just say keep at it and I hope you don't lose interest in this story anytime soon!

Keep up the good work!
Hoodedgenius98 chapter 11 . 8/4
I would like to point out a small mistake its lair not layer.
Nick chapter 11 . 8/4
Loved it all and excited to see which character you add next (won’t be surprised if it’s Jazz with all the foreshadowing, or Kitty with sequential order), and any new positions and kinks you add. Also, loved the borderlands 3 reference in your sign off
Question though? You had non-canonical characters already in your story, and included a list of possible other candidates, and was wondering if you were still planning to include them, because I’d love to see almost all of those you had!
razmire chapter 11 . 8/4
Ember is one of my favorite Danny Phantom girls, if not the favorite, so I was quite looking forward to this chapter. It did not disappoint at all, and I’m hoping that she will make some more appearances in the future.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
The Re-reader chapter 11 . 8/2
this was great can't wait for the next chapter
kenriot1214 chapter 10 . 8/2
On your latest chapter you also meant concert not consort easy mistake with spell or grammer check.
kenriot1214 chapter 11 . 8/2
Please go back and fix lair its awkward to read. Love the story otherwise can't wait for more and I love the giant chapters.
battle manga chapter 11 . 8/2
Love the latest chapter.
SL17H3R R3X chapter 11 . 8/2
About time you posted another chapter. Danny having a girlfriend will be a chance of pace for a bit considering it's only for a week. The wait is a bit of a turn off but considering it's either quantity or quality I'd rather have quality. Good work and keep it up.
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