Damn I hoped you would keep Harry as Senior Aurora, but other than that the story was fantastic! Keep up the good work

I always enjoy a good Daphne and Harry tale. Your storytelling and plot are pretty good, but if I'm being honest there are a lot of technical errorsespecially with misspellings, incorrect pronouns and punctuation. I don't mean to be harsh, but this story would really benefit from a thorough proofreading and some good editing. Besides that, I did very much enjoy reading this, and I thank you for sharing it.

Very good story. I read it all at once. I went to this story on Dorotheas' recommendation. I am very glad I did. Thank you for sharing your time, talents and imagination with us readers.
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Ignore the rude reviewers. Listen careful to the helpful one.

Brilliant story and not just for the sex. Very well imagined and executed. However, you desperately need a good beta/proof reader, as your spelling and use of English is too frequently lacking, as is your punctuation. You should write more, you have talent.

Your most recent Potter Chronicles vignette mentioned remastering this story, which prompted me to reread it. It is a great story and I cannot wait to see how much better the remastering makes it. I am truthfully excited!

Another awesome story going into my favourites.
Well Done.

Great Chapter

Nice fic. I would def love to read an epilogue if you get a chance. Great job and thanks for writing!

Very nice story! Big fan of Dorothea too! Hope you epilogue it or start new story that continues this one,

Great fic. Writing and storytelling was spot on and hope for a another book for this story.

hi! do you mind reuploading chapter 10? it couldn’t be opened.. thx.

lord potter? lady greengrass? this isn't the middle ages wtf

Absolutely loved this story well done.

I'm so confused about Lewis gender... Wtf

Hi I have read this story a couple of times and I really enjoy it but I have a question if I may. Is Lewis Finnick a lady or a man? You seem to go back and forth with this characters gender. Not sure if anyone else has asked I was just curious. Great story btw.