Cool please continue

I like naruto more honest approach. Though I can sense that will be a problem in the future!?

Sasuke?

That scene with the fight with Pyrrha, specifically the part with the scroll and the work around on how to allow Naruto to fight, seems very familiar. I'm having serious De Ja Vu here. Did you do that in the last story or something?

I didn't read the your other story if this one is a reboot but I'm guessing naruto doesn't have the nine tails anymore since he would have heal the sore thumb otherwise...

I just started but doesn't naruto know about chakra? beasts?

I find the fic boring. Naruto being his usual cannon dum ass self kind killing the fic for me.

Very good chapter, keep up the good work.

dracohalo117

You know in the Terms of service it says that you’re not allowed to make an entire chapter just a author note.

this is really interesting! it's definitely up their in the tops of great naruto rwby crossovers, in my opinion right next to Sackcloth and Ashes.

Blake for pairing

Ugh, why would Naruto tell people he hardly knows his secrets?

OK so I'm not gonna sugar coat it, this story is very boring. I'm not trying to be mean, I wanna say this isn't me hating on you, but being brutally honest this story is just bland and boring. Most of the chapters are of Naruto "teaching" Blake/Ruby chakra despite Naruto (at this point) should know they can't use it cause they don't have chakra. You could have better interactions between Naruto & the girls and actual physical training (especially if you don't want Naruto showing off his stronger techniques). Then you somehow nerf Sage Mode (at least personally I feel you did).

Honestly kind of just tired of this story, it feels like it goes nowhere even though it is moving along. Going back to training Blake/Ruby feels more forced at this point even though the reasoning you gave for Blake does make sense, but at this point instead of focusing on Chakra focus on Naruto training her to be a ninja (actual physical training & deception).

In the event you WANT to give the girls chakra (something I don't actually hate), well you can have Naruto constantly pumping chakra into their bodies to the point where their bodies eventually make their own chakra system (I believe a few stories have done this with varying results), then you can have Naruto teaching them things like Jutsu, Sage Mode, etc.

Again not trying to hate on you I do want to enjoy your story, you just need to move on from this cycle of "chakra training" for the girls that don't have chakra.

Good job keep it up

This was a decent and well-written chapter that I can actually follow. Please don’t let Ruby do anymore Sage Mode training. Please update this story soon.