Reviews for The Black Blade, Reforged |
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![]() ![]() Could you please update Reading the Future to Save the Past? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really intrigued by this character. The whole gender identity issue/grandfather/brother/sister thing is a unique quality. I also like the way you write both internal and external dialogue. The story itself seems promising. This "Kazuto" is much less stable and socially avoidant than canon, meaning interactions will be very odd to see. I'm excited for the talk between her and Asuna, since there's been little extensive dialogue between two characters as of yet. I'll be checking in, good luck! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st, put in your summary it is a . 2nd, why bother making Kirito a girl if you just gonna have her look male anyway? Seems kinda pointless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting take, looking forward for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() female Kirito? no offense but I find it weird because I really can't imagine the idea of a female Kirito and I don't even speak of yuri yuck! you lost a reader here, I would have preferred Kirito to remain male lol! |