I cant wait for the next update of this book! I really want to see where it goes.

good chapter

Oceanus is a titan so please for the love of god stop calling him a beast hell with how you’ve written your story Oceanus is Percy’s grandfather cause he’s Amphitrite father.

Prophecy’s aren’t that vague they are usually fairly strait forward with double meanings and usually retain to key events that revolve around people but this prophecy is more or less just poetic and isn’t actually a prophecy cause it doesn’t give any guidance or any general direction to base your journey on.

Love the new chapters! Poor Poseidon, alone in Tartarus.

Hestia, goddess of home, is a villain?

Thanks for the new chapter! And please update again soon!

I like the new chapter! Please update this again soon. Love how the pegasi love the cake.

This story is pretty good so far, but what bothers me most is that Percy is a god, but you wrote him like he is just a bit older, more arrogant son of Poseidon. I mean, you say he is the god of storms and natural disasters - I think that makes him pretty powerful. I miss the teleporting, heightened senses, true form, being in multiple places at once, etc. I think he should be more in touch with nature, if you get what I mean.

I am also interested who is actually going to be the real villain. Are Kronos and Gaea going to rise at the same time? What role will Estelle play here? Will there be the Seven? And of course, the mysterious prophecy. What is it about? Something about Percy's death?

I hope you consider all of this when you write next chapters. And that you update soon!

You know what, I didn’t realize the double chapter before someone said it. Anyway great chapter and keep up the good work! Please update against soon!

chapter 11 and chapter 12 are the same word for word

Please update this again soon! It’s a great story and I need to know what happens to Percy!

how can he lose to a storm spirit when he's the god of storms shouldn't he be there master because he is storms
and won't he have some domain over the sky cause I don't know storms come from the sky

Not to be that guy, but Kronos has a Roman version called Saturn - if I remember correctly. But I can understand you hinting at a stronger effect - presumably Gaea. Besides my nitpicking, nice chapter. Liked the interactions.

This chapter was a letdown.