Reviews for Primal Power |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Me gustó el capitulo podrías seguir la historia por favor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Add hit in this fanfiction |
![]() ![]() ![]() Make a fanfiction of dragon Ball super and to love ru when rito unlocke ultra instinct and master ultra instinct |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I say I kind of want golden darkness to hitch a ride to nemus planet by complete accident and just decides she's living there after seeing it and depending on when this tournament takes place have the characters that are aware of nemus status be spectating |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm assuming the characters can use Ki if so have rito ask nemus to train him in its use and now that lala is aware of there being more universes I can picture her trying to invent something to travel to them Also I'm curious if there will be dbz type fights to protect earth and maybe even dragon balls themselves from this universes namekians if they're is any that is |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I say I'm really looking forward to seeing how everyone reacts to the reveal of him being the god of destruction and should have Zeno show up later and nemus reacts exactly like beerus tho lala could pull a Goku and become his friend |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story please keep it going am really enjoying it |
![]() ![]() ![]() would have been more interesting if you made Rito into Riko (fem). and mc sibling into girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder what Nemus is going to do once he encounters nemesis. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo aquí esperando que nemus haga algo pervertido |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see the battle royale of the gods. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see this fic isn't dead. Guess all the gods don't like being mocked. Doubly so if they are a Saiyan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Buen capitulo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This will teach other beings in the universe to never ever offend a God of Destruction at all, if they value their lives. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We don’t really need A/N’a in the middle of the Chapter, it takes us out of our reading zone. Just trust that the readers are smart enough to figure things out, or just put it at the end of the chapter |