The exposition and explanations in this fanfic seem hamfisted and aren't delivered in either the most organic or the most interesting way. Not to mention they're very, very dry and bare bones basic, nothing unlike the Metal Gear series.

The action looks very, very underwhelming. Considering the source you're using, this is pretty much an unforgivable mistake.

Even certain scenes that should hold some emotional weight feel hollow. I simply didn't give a shit when Inko died, which is the fault of the author who looks like he didn't even try to begin with and just wanted to kill off a character in the most quickest and laziest way possible.

Dissappointing, trully dissappointing. What is even more dissappointing is how NO ONE in the review section even fcking bothered to properly read this. Either they don't give a shit or their standards are very low.

Is Sam Jetstream Sam?

the person I love the most in this story is bakugo... please continue it

Update

This fight scene should be read while listening to Focus, by Hocus Pocus. It's the same song they play in robocop, it fits perfectly.

So does Izuku have a penis? It was one of the things I always wondered about MGRR

i want wolf to call kacchan uncle

Awesome! Just awesome.

Wait a minute, did Izuku have metal jaw?

Omg got an idea izuku as yuuki terumi

Ur including wolf!? This will be even more enjoyable

Please update

i don't know y but i love everything u write keep up the dank memes

NOOOOO CINNAMON ROLL INKO WHYYY... well it makes sense for the story. Anyway i already like its the story and you changed little izuku's hair, btw i realized that your new stories involved izuku wearing a trench coat hahahaha. Anyway i hope to see new chapters in the future.

Finally a raiden/Izuku fic! Will there be a pairing and if so why not Momo or Mei