While I see there being lot more visible changes in the future like the face reveal and end talk with Sword Maiden about their different reactions to same trauma, you still need to make some more changes visible sooner to keep this interesting till we actually get to those points. I can see why you would skip most till then, but how she reunited with Cow girl and her uncles reaction to GS is one of the things I can see easily changed from original story and therefore something you should not just skip.

i love this take on goblin slayer it is an interesting take on the whole story keep up the good work

I’m liking the altered back story for goblin slayer but it’d be better if the story diverted more from canon in more ways, like goblin slayer had more skills, abilities or can use magic, etc. Simply having him be female and changing little else isn’t very interesting, that said, I’m hoping to see a new chapter soon.

it's good, keep it coming mate

inyteresting.

This is quite a novel concept and interesting but I feel like you are not fully utilising her as character and just retreading canon, like for example did she any to say to the female monk due to there similar experiences. On another note your grammar could use some work and I would suggest getting a beta to help with that. All in all a quite intriguing that I hope gets better and better

Update pleaseeeee

update

Hmmm do you plan to have any romantic intrest? Or is it only going to be adventure and such? I mean it doesn't matter either way but it would be interesting to see how you played out the romance route.

Priestess is here, finally best girl turns up.

You keep switching between past and present tense, and some of your choice of words are odd and feels out of place, like Goblin “Subjugation”...
Subjugation implies conquest and exploitation, where as contextually, extermination is a much more ample expression.

I skipped the first chapter because it felt like an awful exposition dump, there is a reason why that “arc”(?) was told to the reader later on in the book, manga, and anime...

Female Goblinslayer is a nice idea for finally giving a rape survivor some unambiguous recovery and empowerment, which I don't feel Swordmaiden got. You'd need to write a bit more about her hopes, fears and feelings to show the difference between male and female GS, however, rather than repeating the events of the original story. Saying that she keeps her helmet on so she isn't ambushed was a good start, and she most likely feels that she has lost/rejected her own feminity. Does she feel protective of the more traditionally feminine party members for that reason? How would she react to Spearman hitting on her? I know GS has very little visible emotion, but you need to get inside her head and/or develop her emotions more quickly to get anything fresh out of this premise.

Would be even better if Guild Girl did not know that GS is a lady!

Very nice.
To quote a 1st episode parody, the baby killing scene:
"The only goblins are dead goblins. So I'm gonna make you GOOD!"

Very nice indeed more please