Reviews for Older Brother - Tournament Trials
Rebatrek chapter 6 . 7/2
Very good follow up story. I hope you find the time for another installment soon. Thank you for sharing.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 6 . 4/29
Well, I enjoyed the story, but I’m disappointed I don’t see another sequel, so I didn’t get to read this storyline to completion. I had hoped, but alas, I am left with having to try to imagine it myself.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 6 . 4/5
Really enjoyed the fic.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 1 . 4/5
Looking forward to the sequel.
spiffy2143 chapter 6 . 2/5
Lol I love seeing Dumbledore not have his plans come together. I hope you really do decide to do another sequel for this story. I have loved it so far:)
Guest chapter 6 . 12/25/2019
You said that you will make this a christmas story, so will the sequel comes up? Btw, merry christmas
Navn Ukjent chapter 6 . 12/25/2019
Nice fic again.

It's now Christmas a year later, and I hope to see a sequel soon...
santoskamilla.14 chapter 5 . 12/22/2019
Como Molly pode ser tão cega depois do que aconteceu Ginny? Será que os gêmeos não poderiam colocar pelo menos uma semente de dûvida nos pais?! Eles também deveriam conversar com Ginny, ensiná-la e fazêr ela entender o perigo do mundo bruxo, afinal ela é sua irmazinha.
santoskamilla.14 chapter 2 . 12/22/2019
Harry comendo pipoca enquanto sua mãe lida com Dumbledor é a melhor imagem mental que poderia receber! Kkkkkkkk simplesmente perfeito.
santoskamilla.14 chapter 6 . 12/22/2019
Amo esse mundo que escreveu! Gosto quando as histórias são inteligentes e emocionantes !
E é impossìvel não amar Harry e sua famìlia. Espero ansiosamente por mais! Estou ansiona para mais de Aaron e quero saber mais sobre Dahlia e Jasmine!
Gostaria de mais sobre os wesley também! Os mais irmãos velhos são maravilhosos (Bill e Carlinhos). Ginny se deixar a adoração de heroi também é um personagem forte !
Anastasia fan chapter 6 . 11/27/2019
Thank you for sharing! It’s amazing story , I love the India of having try family for Harry, it’s first story with sibling there Harry not neglect! Honestly, I can’t imagine lily Potter abound her baby. Thank you! I have a great time.
Chemom chapter 6 . 10/2/2019
I’ve enjoyed this story as well as “Older Brother”. It’s a neat plot and you tie it all together well, while making the characters come to life.
Would be great to see a continuation of the story, though I appreciate how you bring each section to completion so things aren’t totally left hanging. :)
Thanks for sharing your story!
Guest chapter 6 . 9/19/2019
- Musing
Was rereading this and the thought occurred to me, that no one has had the Twins use Molly's love for her family against her to nullify some of her Dumbledore worship.

Like asking why she'd want them to follow the man who got Uncles Fabian and Gideon killed with his "catch and release policy".

Order caught the DE, handed them over to the DMLE, who had to deal with a bribed Geezergamot that let the DE go free again.

How many of those who finally overwhelmed her brothers had been captured before?

How many would've been part of the attack, if stronger measures had been taken to put them in the hospital?

Cutters, Piercers, Bludgeoning Curses, Bonebreakers, Banishers, Reductors, Bombarda's. None of them really Dark spells.

So why use Stunners, when you're outnumbered and they're trying to kill you?

What would she do when outnumbered and hearing that the DE intended to have some "fun" with Ginny?

Use stunners, which they can easily counter as they outnumber her? Or go with the abovementioned spells to put them down and protect her daughter.

That the Twins would gladly go lethal to protect their FAMILY and that Dumbledore can go hang himself with his own beard for all they care.

That he'd care more for redeeming a Malfoy, than for a Weasley getting hurt, as there's enough of those around, that's what the Purists say anyway.

Don't fully recall the previous story with the Chamber and if Ginny got caught up in it or not.

If yes, than point out that they'd rather put their faith in someone who's actually looked out for them, rather than one playing games with their lives.

Oh, she'll shout and rave, but this combined with them playing hardball about leaving as soon as they have their NEWTs and completely cutting her out of their lives. About not being at their eventual wedding, about being denied the chance to see her grandkids. That she's picking an outsider over her Family.

It'll leave an impression and if Arthur still gets hurt while "guarding" the prophecy, that's when it'll hit her that the Twins might've been right.

That they were trying to warn her and she wouldn't listen and how it nearly cost her her husband.

Molly isn't a complete idiot. Frame the argument in a way that she'll get and she'll start asking questions.

Dumbledore wants blind obedience, doesn't want questions asked as it might reveal his secrets. Secrets that would ensure no one would listen to him anymore.

Which is why he's so allergic to the truth.

Best way to counter his influence is with truth and asking questions.

They'll nestle inside the mind and speak up when inconvenient.

That little bit of doubt nagging at you. That's what they need to plant in her to summon the: "NOT my daughter, you bitch!" side.

Molly's greatest fear is losing her Family. So use it against her to get her to wake up and smell the coffee.

*shrugs*
crooked859 chapter 6 . 9/16/2019
Hope you continue this!
Mari Wollsch chapter 6 . 9/8/2019
super series xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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