Hi, again, couldn't notice as re-reading this, that Gunther is pretty hard on Jackie even though he loves her...I know it was to find out why she left...but he was really hard on hard on her...especially after what his ex did...its kinda messed, don't ya think. Might just be me. Still is a fantastic read, and I love rereading it, tho I think it could use some editing as there are a few spelling and grammar errors, but still awesome story. I hope you post more like this!

Great story, really awesome!

Bitch! So proud of your ass! Like this was amazing! Why didn't you tell me about this sooner!?
So hot btw! I am fanning myself lol. I expect more from you now!
Great job tho.

Who ever Gunther's ex is, she is total bitch! Thank goodness he broke up with her.
Also GuntherxJackie ftw!

Omg! This is amazing! So cute and just ahhhh! U had me feeling hot throughout the whole thing! Please, oh please keep up the great work!
Also really messed how that girl and gordie treated her! I felt horrible for Jackie. Glad Gunther and Kick did something.
Please keep updating and i can't wait to read more of your work!

This is the best so far you've done! I really enjoy this series and easier to digest and more fun than Senior Year (no offense). But I'd love to see more of the Pirate story!

Good so far! I also I would've prefer I mild making out over total intercourse, because you can't be too careful especially when they develop babies. Since they love each other that much, they wouldn't have no problem being married to one another.

This is already starting to love this story, not to mention the main focus Jackie, and more depth to her, including her crush on Gunther!

Extra joy for Kindall being an official couple in the background! Freakin bonus, dear lady!

I used to hate Jackie for being creepy, but due to Gravity Falls with Fiddleford in that episode with mind-erasing from being a normal guy to whackjob, and then slowly regaining his memory, being more sympathetic, I really enjoy Jackie now! Fiddleford and Jackie both have in common.