Its been over 5 months either update or delete this, hell just put discontinued on the Title/Summary

Just delete it if you are not going continue it.

I'll probably try a fem renart Bell story, but I can't promise it'll be the same as what you want to do.

Well, I hope the rewrite goes smoothly. Looking forward to it.

The idea is definitely there, although (spoiler but most probably know) this would mean a female Bell was raised by Zeus who by all accounts in fairly perverted. Although given it would be like his granddaughter would probably give her just about anything she ask for meaning training earlier and perhaps a weapon or even magic. This is where I really like the Renard Bell idea lots fields like senjutsu or foxfire could be employed.
About writing style while I could follow some might complain that this is far to “chunky” honestly good luck with that, chunky is hard to de chunk editing making more dialogue can help but not always fix. I noticed in one of the last paragraphs when Loki arrived carrying Bella several characters interacted yet no splitting was to be had so if you did get such complaints hopefully this detail helps out.
Lastly honestly good job and looking forward to a reboot when or if you so choose to make one.

Interesting!Please update soon.

Not bad, the story is starting of strong. I find stories that have female leads refreshing because almost every other fanfiction out there has a male protagonist.

Reverse Harem! :3

Okay. I like the concept. I like the character alterations. And I like the progress.

But dear gods please work on you formatting!
Five people should not have a conversation back and forth in a single paragraph with no line breaks. It's a giant chunk of text and makes it painful and slow to read .
If you can format your writing to be more reader friendly um sure you'll get some more feedback from people.

Nice idea :)

This looks promising. First attractive Fem Bell fic I've seen. It would be interesting if she as a reverse harem since Bell is genderbended. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)

Interesting concept, can't wait to see how it plays out

Interesting but will there be a ship ?