That was an interesting way of doing a credits scene. Very creative.

Overall, I had fun reading this! It is very lighthearted, and I loved watching the interactions between our main characters. The humor was also really good. The fourth wall jokes especially were really good. Nice job! :)

Woah. That whole thing wouldn't felt out of place in an anime final battle. I can tell you put a lot of effort into that scene.

Anyway, one more chapter to go!

Rainbowser? Okay, that is an awesome pun!

While I was reading this, I was humming the Koopa's Road theme. The atmosphere is THAT good.

Nice Aladdin references. Too bad we didn't get to see a Robin Williams Genie though. That would have been awesome.

I find the "this is a peaceful level for being right before Bowser" comment to be interesting, as most second to last levels are like that.

Oh man, Bowser is a jerk. Now it is officially my headcanon that he got Kamek to enchant the staircase.

First off, I can only imagine how confusing it must have been for the kids seeing the first painting, only to find that it didn't lead anywhere( I saw a walkthrough before I played the game).

Secondly, that was actually a really clever idea! Tiny Huge Island was a pretty cool level, and I like what you did with it in this story.

Nice fourth-wall joke at the beginning. I feel bad for Luigi though, as Tall Tall Mountain is a scary stage when you think about it.

Heave-Hos, huh? You know, I never knew the name of those enemies. I guess this shows that you did your research, which I can really appreciate.

This was a good chapter, although Wario really needs to check his attitude.

Nice, body swapping! I love body swaps so much, so this story just earned ten more bonus points. I also liked the moment where Mario was trying to warm Luigi up by hugging him; that was sweet.

Yay(?), Wario is out? I liked the dialogue if Chief Chilly and hiw it showed he was only concerned about the mustaches. Honestly,that seems a little petty on his part, but it is still funny. Especially when he called the Mario bros "peach fuzzies."

And wait, Yoshi is cold blooded? I never really thought about that being one of his attributes before.

Like the jab at Wario at the end. And hey, looks like Bowser adopted a new skill! While it didn't really matter in the end, I still appreciate the effort.

Not much to say on this one. I'm glad they got another star though.

Wow, having multiple players sure made the Eyerok battle easier. Again, Nintendo should really take notes.

This was a nice chapter. One part I found interesting was Mario's comment about the tox box designer being rushed. Considering that it has already been established that Bowser is a MASSIVE idiot, I think he was the one who designed the tox boxes and left them that way on purpose.

Nice reference to Mario and Sonic. I'm also starting to pick up that you put a lot of Spongebob references into your stories.

You know, as I was reading this, I was wondering what Lethal Lava Land would look like in an HD remake. I bet it would be awesome!

Hehe, it's a good thing Yoshi speaks Dorrie. And I actually disagree with you on this one; I actually didn't find Hazy Maze Cave too bad. Sure, it's not the best level, but I think it's better than Tick Tock Clock and Rainbow Ride (I died SO many times in those levels).