I love this. do you think you could make another part to it? or turn it into a short story?

Hello I am not an English speaker, forgive the writing errors. I really liked your story, very cool about KibaSaku especially.
I enjoy it, I hope you do another in the future

This plot has amazing potential for further storyline. Yes please!

Some of the hottest smut I've read out of possibly 2000 fictions I've read. In my top ten or twenty. You could graduate from this level and write a romance novel, if you haven't already. The emotion, intensity, and passion is so deep. It was long, but I was hooked until the end. Pacing was perfect. Just keep doing what your doing. I'm going to read your other fictions. I have a feeling I'll like them a lot.

My goodness, this has got to be some of the most sour of lemons I have read. So freake'n intense and so much heat. Of course very expected from Kiba being as wild as he is. Haha. Very well written and he plot felt just right for this for their development. I am not much into affair stories but this is just too good. I would totally read a few more chapters of this. Great work!

Hottttttt!

I don’t ysusllu take the time to review as I should. But that was sooooo hot! Well done! If you get a chance, a sequel of Sasuke discovering what his in attention has driven his wife to. Right into Kiba’s arms.

More of KibaSaku. Damn. She must be that tight.

it was interesting. I wonder if you could write something similar just instead of kiba give naruto .