Can we please have another chapter. This is just soooo good!

Lol! I loved this!

Hahaha! I can see Merlin, in a Hawaiian shirt, scolding Dumbledore! That would be absolutely delightful.

_ this was so great! Just, everything—his outfit, the dragon commands, scolding Dumbledore—interesting idea and well-written. Well done!

This is exactly how I imagine angry Merlin after a couple centuries. It'd be cool if there was a follow where the audience found out "some guy in a Hawaiian shirt called Emrys" was actually Merlin.

I love this, so very much. I only wish there was more!
Really fun story.

Dumbledore you fucked up

Love love love, but pleaseeeee make more chapters, this was the best

Oh my gods it would be really cool if you made a story out of this. Anyway I loved it

LOL!

Only one chapter and only one story?! Aww man, I thought I found another series of laughs.
I guarantee you this was hilarious though. I would love to know if you have more planned or if this is a one off. Dumbledore shivering before Merlin, let alone a young Merlin? Seems quite funny to imagine, but unlikely. Merlin surely knows how to pull people aside to prevent public confrontations.
Your opening quotation marks were off, however. You seem to have used commas by mistake.

This could be a great start to a longer story.

Please tell me there's another chapter! If not I love this story if there is
Can't wait for more /
Kudos

This made me laugh.
The dragon language was made up or is a translation of something? Because I’m making my own Merlin fanfic and would like to use it.

are you going to do a sequel?