Reviews for Blackout |
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KorevainsoLightshire chapter 6 . 10/31/2019 I'm wondering what's more to the story. I mean the big question is why can't they remember multiple days? Semblance of some kind? In any case how is Qrow not leaking killing intent right now? I'm almost certain he's thinking of eays to discreetly kill Jaune Arc. |
hirshja chapter 5 . 5/24/2019 Oh fuck off with that “being fined” bullshit. Even if Atlas didn’t press charges, Vale would. At the very least, this would mean that there would be an international incident if atlas protected him. |
hirshja chapter 4 . 5/24/2019 If you don’t have Jacques get arrested for this then you’re nuts. It doesn’t matter how wealthy he is, he is essentially leading a terrorist attack against a school for those standing against the Grimm. There’s no way any of the councils would let that go. |
AltenativeFutureFan27 chapter 4 . 5/17/2019 The marching song of the 300 Spartans marching to kill jaune Buddy your a boy make a big noise running in the street cause your gonna be a dead men someday You got mud on your face, you big disgrace Kicking your bones all over the place, singin' We will, we will kill you We will, we will kill you Buddy, you're a young man, dead man Shouting in the street, the world's gonna kill you someday You got blood on your face, you big disgrace Waving your corps all over the place We will, we will kill you, sing it! We will, we will kill you Buddy, you're never gonna be an old man, poor man Cause your gonna be resting in peace today You got mud on your face, big disgrace Somebody better put you back into your grave We will, we will kill you, sing it We will, we will kill you, everybody We will, we will kill you, hmm We will, we will rock you Alright |
rickyp01 chapter 4 . 4/30/2019 I am currently making a concious decision not to read the next chapter until i've made the following remark: Jaques is F-ed. if i'm reading the scene right he's currently in some form of metal-based contraption, while threatening the death of Polarity-girl's love. I guess him and Jaune will soon have 1 thing in common, Pyrha's crushing on both of them. |
Adol116 chapter 6 . 4/29/2019 Love the story looking forward to the next chapter |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 Well it was nice to see Jaune standing up for himself for a short moment... |
Kalaong chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 Qrow's a LOT more understanding than most would expect him to be. |
Shadow Joestar chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 KO awesome chapter, well that was something as the married lovers will have to wait a bit longer to hear from the Hunters while trying to figure things out. |
LordLoverDuck chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 still funny as hell, i'd love to see the school gossip mill and everyone's reactions, so who will be the first to come out and accept their marriage to Jaune (and cause a domino effect for the others) looking forward to more |
Fyr RedNight chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 It's great to see how the plot manages to make the ways to undo their marriage more and more complicated as the chapters comes. And Weiss Arc, huh? It has a nice ring to it I'll admit. Looking forward for the next update! |
Agent-G chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 I'll be honestly it took me a moment to remember what this story was about when I started reading lol. Thankfully my memory got jarred after a couple of paragraphs. Well now that they are stuck at Beacon I hope this means we can start to focus on Jaune winning over the girls to the whole marriage idea. I know Pyrrha would be more for it than anyone else but the others are at various levels. Plus it might be nice to get in some character development before the plot moves forward. |
TheNiemand chapter 4 . 4/28/2019 Halfway true the chapter and I honestly can say the fastes way to annulate the marriage is really simple by law every contact you maid, every purchache or whatever while you are drunk or intoxicated otherwhise becames automatically invalid. So they marriage isnt even legal right now and they arent even married at all. -Reading further- Nevermind. I am actually glad that someone would put this kind of logical law into it. I may give this fic a chance, because I honestly dont like drunken marriage fic because everyone of them ignore this mayor detail. Kuddos to you then. |
Sheploo chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 Poor Jaune... |
246vili chapter 6 . 4/28/2019 Finally! Another RWBY story where they realise Atlas's tech is way too easy to take over by a third party. And before the Battle of Beacon no less. I like it how Qrow is more inmpressed with Jaune's "accomplishment" than pissed about him bedding both of his nieces. Tai won't be that forgiving I bet. Keep up the good work. |