how long till it gets relessed.

It’s an interesting and so to say... different concept. However theres a lot of room to improve, and i’m afraid i have to say that the ‘plan’ that boruto and himawari come up with in chapter two is very weak. The characters are showing emotions of how ‘brilliant’ it is but it really isnt. It just shows a weakness in your writing but im sure you will improve. I do hope you know that this is constructive criticism. I’m just trying to help you out - and im pointing this out cuz when i normally give constructive criticism to others, people get butthurt and think i’m flaming them or something. Anyways, carry on writing and with experience and hopefully more reviews will help you to improve in the newr future. Thank you for doing what you can though!

so, this is fix fic.
not much drama which is plus
my complain is just the last paragraph that just ... so sudden
there is not the introduction and interrogate? from ask that.

Omg looks interesting, how old are Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke from the past? I'm interested in the story, good work