Reviews for The veela and the lightning elemental |
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ayanda1208 chapter 7 . 8/2 I can't stop crying ...I loved everything about this book |
Mark Sinfield chapter 7 . 4/18 made me tear up |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29 There are very few anamagi due to the fact that it’s a particularly unpleasant process and possess several risks. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29 What? The only reason why harry needed to be sacrificed in the first place is cause of the horcux inside his body. Seeing how it’s already been destroyed he doesn’t need to die. |
Ninja3knight chapter 7 . 2/21 The ending gave me chills it was amazingly written |
Qarz chapter 1 . 12/20/2019 If I had a dollar for every grammar mistake I'd be a millionaire after this chapter. They make the story barely readable. |
J flood chapter 7 . 11/27/2019 I must admit your story is excellent I'd like to see it expanded upon |
hunzbookwyrm chapter 5 . 11/15/2019 Great story, hope you are still working on this story? |
r.tidmore chapter 7 . 10/13/2019 ok. no not really. dumbledores dead so how did he release the prophecy. Ron expelled and at home so how did he get to voldies rebirth? fair attempt but only gets an poor grade due to plot holes(never could figure out if unspeakables were studying Harry or the book Luna gave him) and spelling mistakes. |
Khatix chapter 6 . 9/9/2019 Its true Dumbledore is the true villain of the HP verse, thru his own actions and purposeful in-actions he was responsible for both Grienwald and Riddle gaining power and becoming dark lords and he was close to making Harry a third one. I'm still of the opinion that JKR condones child abuse and neglect, she had Harry name one of his kids after two of the four men who ruined his childhood and called them brave and heros for god sakes both Dumbledore and Snape should of been imprisoned or at the minimum lost their jobs for child neglect and abuser because there is NO WAY in a sane and real world like ours would they both kept their jobs. |
wiebeP chapter 7 . 9/1/2019 the end of this story is so beautiful with all my love and respect to you good sir or lady. brought a couple of tears to my eyes. |
JohnyXD chapter 3 . 6/13/2019 It's too bad. I like the story but the grammar is cringe-worthy. |
AbandonedPlay chapter 7 . 5/29/2019 I absolutely loved this story keep up the good work |
George1892 chapter 7 . 5/13/2019 That was... rushed. There were lots of typos and some of it didn't make a lot of sense. |
stvwilling chapter 7 . 5/5/2019 Awesome Story |