wow
i've been reading this for ages
and this is a great conclusion.
thx

I like the concept of this story. I like how you combine the books and the games together. There is really any stories that does this. So thumbs up for you. The only complaint I have is that it seems to be rushed at the ending. It seems at the blue to me that Charlie fell in love with Michael after getting out of a long time relationship with john. Maybe it's just me. Anyway I am excited to read the sequel to this story. So I can't wait. Sorry for the long review. So have a good day. Good bye.

As much as I’ve had my issues with the last few chapter of this story, I‘m still quite happy to see it continue onward. It was an enjoyable reading experience.

Though, going into your next story, I would recommend that you go back to the more slow the pacing for your chapters, similar to the first three-quarters of this story.
The main problem I had with the last few chapters was that there was just too much crammed into every chapter; the pacing seemed heavily rushed.

Just something to think on.

Anyways,
Best of luck for your next story.

Till next time.

Oh darn, I can't believe it's over. I can't wait for the sequel though.I REALLY enjoyed reading this and hope that I'll be able to fine the next one soon. Keep writing and putting out good content. 3

What no what about John? Come on in the books he was the only one who realized Charlie was replaced please keep it Charlie x John

God... A lot of stuff happened this chapter. It was like one thing after the other.

This is really good! I can't wait to see what happens next! This is one of the best fnaf fanfics I've read in a long time. Please update soon!

A good continuation, and to top thing off questions are starting to be answered.

Superb.

Shame we must be forced to wait, but where’s the fun in finding out everything at once. Story writing at its finest.

Anyways, best of luck for now. Till next time.

Interesting...

Some over use of pre-established dialogue, I must admit. Most wasn’t bad mind you, but the “I should be dead, but I’m not” line could of been improved through some minor tweaking - it was a bit of a shoehorn which sadly seemed out of place.

This was a good chapter, don’t get me wrong, and I’m glad you’re doing alright during this time of strife. It had a rather speedy latter half and I’m definitely interested in knowing what will happen now.

So, till next time - good luck, and best wishes.

Are you still updating this? I hope so, because this is by far one of the best FNaF fanfics I have ever read. I love the way you portrayed William Afton as completely insane, and it's been a good while since I read a fanfic that didn't show Henry as an angel. His and William's relationship reminds me somewhat of Voldemort and Dumbledore - neither free of sins. Voldemort, as Riddle, resented Dumbledore, and that resent turned into hate. Michael seems a bit like Harry - just a guy who wants to help the world, yet a puppet in the hands of either one of them.

And if so, who would Charlie be?

This was a chapter a kinda poignant to me, Charlie missing her old life not perfect but considerably better, was something sad.
In addition, both trying to fight together against monsters that move in the shadows and in their nightmares have been brought near enough, even Charlotte did not deny Michael as her boyfriend ;)
Apparently they will have company in the next chapter and i can't wait to find out who it is! Another great chapter!
Happy Valentine's Day, something late! '

What’s wrong Charlie feel a bit...connected to the puppet.

Is it just me when I first read the books I though There was going to be a big twist in it that made it so John was the Crying child witch is why He tried so hard. To get Charlie to forget about the animatronics But that it turns out he has amnesia And doesn't remember the incident. Or Some of his childhood. A.k.a his time living with his father Afton

Another Fantastic chapter and I hope this isn't the end of John x Charlie I mean come on boys in the actual book John was right And I hope this doesn't end like in the story. Where is if she had him listen to him she would have lived. Cause I mean come on guys somebody try to tell me John isn't Best guy and If you do your wrong

That was sad and intense at the same time...
I like how you connected the scenarios of the games and books on the one hand killed in an alley and on the other hand rebuilt by her father, although apparently here she is more of a cyborg that an android, i like that turn and how you are building the plot.
Mrs. Afton makes a small visit, um? Interesting. I wonder who is the Marionette, Sammy? Or is the brother of Michael?
Okay, this became very intriguing and creepy with Nightmare lurking in the corners.
Another great chapter of a great writer! Thank you!