Reviews for Who Dares Wins
Katzztar chapter 22 . 18h
I have to admit it. This is the first time I sincerely like Pansy Parkinson. I hope Trevor sees sense and helps Pansy get out from Dumbledore's thumb...or Sirius helps her. And isn't that a surprise to see Snape welcome Sirius ?
Katzztar chapter 21 . 19h
I was worried that Pansy went to Longbottom Manor and neither Neville nor his Gran was there. But Trevor did give an answer of "no harm will befall you" so she's safe ... aaaasss long as she's there at Longbottom Manor. I did not miss that wording was "no harm will befall you, here". Then there is the "I'm sure our parents will be thrilled to meet you." that sounded rather ominious. Oh for fuck's sake (and yes I'm qouting the story when it feels needed ;P) I can see the parents go to Dumbledore who will try to convince cough*make*cough Pansy become an spy!

Hopefully Trevor will see problem and honor his brother's offer of sanctuary to Pansy, either help her stay at Longbottom Manor or help her escape to Harry & Neville.
Katzztar chapter 20 . 19h
Oh, for Fuck's sake! This "Leader of the Light" crap sounds like a cult!
With Albus as current leader and chose Junior to succeed him. Sounds like Junior really is a "Chosen One". James Sr is fully brainwashed into it. It reminds me of actual cults in real life.
Katzztar chapter 19 . 19h
I've been going over this for several chapters but ... they may call Junior the "real boy who lived" but he isn't really if we go by what Lily said of that night. He could really be the "Chosen one" alluded to in the prophesy, but that doesn't mean he was the real BWL.
Lily said she was able to charge up both charms, to shield and hide, over Junior but only got one up on Harry, the shield. Lily & Sirius wonder if her emotions at time could have overpowered the shield.
From what it sounds like Voldemort didn't even see James Junior there, only Lily & Harry. It was Harry to was aimed at, who got the AK reflected.

That title, Boy who Lived, it refers to one specific action. Just one point of time; the night that that Voldemort attacked and AKed a Potter baby but the baby, Harry, survived.
So while Dumbledore may have been talking about James Junior when he was saying "boy who lived" all those times he was in Wizengamot, as far as the public is concerned, it is Harry who is the Boy who Lived. And even if Junior turns out to be one to face Voldemort as the "Chosen one", Harry will still be the Boy Who Lived.

Really Diggle? You're disgusted by Harry being a "murderer". Obviously Diggle is a moron who does not grasp what it means to FIGHT IN A WAR.
Katzztar chapter 18 . 20h
Ya, know if there was more of a crack-type parody, it's title could been "Oh for Fuck's Sake!", as it is, it should be the unofficial secondary title

Wow, what a rollercoaster. Seeing the title of the chapter "The courtship", I remembered how Harry said he didn't want to date until the war was over. then something about a betrothal. Then I see Ron & Hannah playing chess... and she's holding her own against Ron! So I wondered if they were going to become a couple. Maybe the chapter's title was referring to them? But then whammo, it's courtship between Potter and Bones. And almost on cue, Lily arrives bringing Junior. Oh, for fuck's sake! But wait, the contract was loosely written and since magic decided that James and Junior were dead, it didn't bind to them and as such Harry who already accepted the Potter Lordship has fallen for fair miss Bones.
Thankfully Junior declares he won't try to take his twin's girl away. Oh but the rollercoaster isn't done yet, for it seems the good Corporal likes the lovely Regent Bones and was asking her out on a date.
Katzztar chapter 17 . 20h
Welp that solves that, Trevor was acting and knew he had a twin.
No wonder the 'wand' never responded to Neville, it really was just a stick.

How the fuck can they wonder where it all went wrong? They LIED by hiding, they let FAMILY believe they were grieving for family that was worse than dead. Which leads to another good question, just who were the couple in St. Mungo's all this time? The couple under polyjuice had to be under real injury from the way they acted. And now I'm wondering, the one that was normally disguised as Alice quite often gave candy wrappers to Neville (Neville noticed the one they believed Frank had 'switched beds' had the wrappers, so it was quirk to that individual that was most often Alice, but after the mixed- potions became Frank... could the wrappers meant something, a "call" for help?
Oh, it could be simple, like the person liked and, as Neville been nice when visiting caring for them, they gave the wrappers to Neville.
Katzztar chapter 16 . 21h
At first I was thinking that Augusta knew about Trevor but then realized she sent her patronus to her grandson ... but never specified the person as in "Neville, my granson" as such the patronus went to BOTH boys, Neville and Trevor.

From his behavior, Trevor acts as if he didn't know about Neville. he acted as if he didn't know he had a twin. If' true, I was wondering why if he was raised by his parents. Were their memories altered? no, Frank & Alice knew him so they had their memories.
Either Dumbledore played his tricks and got them to not tell Trevor or he was acting, just like he did with the name "Trevor Barclay"
Katzztar chapter 15 . 21h
Oh for fucks sake indeed! o.O
Katzztar chapter 12 . 22h
O.O Oookaaay Now you really shocked me. I was expecting something odd about the potions, but I was NOT expecting Polyjuice Potion. Or that the falling potions meant that the order of who got what med meant the potions went to wrong patients.

Oh for fucks sake, I hope its not another of Dumbledore's plots of 'let's hide the parents while the son is abandoned and suffers'.
Katzztar chapter 11 . 23h
Aw sh... That strange red potion... it had something to do with what happened to the Longbottoms wasn't it? They likely would have recovered sooner if they've not been been given some potion that kept them in a mentally crippled state. Something happened when Neville bumped into the healer with the potions.
Katzztar chapter 7 . 7/26
Yeah, it is really telling that James said aloud he hid with 'entire family' and only caught what the F he said when Griphook called his bullshit out.
Katzztar chapter 5 . 7/26
So Sirius is already freed. Good. But still, there needs to be a confrontation between him and James Sr.
Sure James Sr can claim "Dumbledore said..." all he wants but unless Dumbledore imprisoned them, James was free to go clear Sirius' name and set him free. But "Dumbledore said so" they chose to HIDE while Sirius rotted in Azkaban.
Katzztar chapter 3 . 7/26
No Junior, Sirius did not live 12 years in Hell because he didn't know his "best friend" was alive. Sirius was in prison because his FORMER friend abandoned him.

Frankly, Sirius should have met James Sr, with a punch to the jaw.

And Dumbledore! He knew, KNEW, they were alive! He knew that when he testified that Sirius was Secret Keeper. Dumbledore is as at fault as Crouch Sr. is for Sirius' wrongful imprisonment. Shouldn't he be considered guilty of perjury?

Hopefully now that Bones has seen both adult Potters alive, she can clear Sirius' name.
MavtheMustang chapter 2 . 7/26
Another fucking story where Harry is a badass yet lets Hermione or some other bitch elbow and push him around just because they can? Fuck that.
KariAnn chapter 22 . 7/24
Wow and Wow again. Twins and twins and original.
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