So for Ben’s powers, if he were to use, say, Big Chill, would his ice powers go through his sword or through his armor? And would he still be able to fly using Big Chill’s power?

its chutkluu time

Awsome plzzz add more to read

Will Ben ever get the chance to regain the omnitrix?

great

something feels wrong about this story, I can't put my finger on it yet but it feels like something is not done well with Ben's character here.

My only advice it do NOT rush any romance. Nothing ruins a story more then forced relationships.

Obviously the voice is from El'Terhor, spectral in Spain where I am from.

Intriging.

got to say this looks like to be an interesting story can't wait to read what happens next

ok, you have my interest. not gonna lie when j saw ben talkingghe way he was i initially though it was an alien quirk. verry much interested fo see where this goes.

It is... Interesting?

I currently have no opinion on this story, except I ask for you to continue so I can an opinion of it.

Oh yeah, thank you for writing!

Thanks for providing the referenced story... I didn't know what to make of this Ben.
It's little what happened in this chapter, so I can't say if this is a good or bad story, but it's not badly written.

10 0ut of 10

it's great