*CLUCK* - Noice.

Crushingly sweet. Awesome fic mate

Omg that was so sweet and cute. ️️️️️

I have never been as speechless as I am right now. It's the kind of astonishment that can only born when you read something so, so wonderful, so good for your heart. I can't really put it into words. I love Broly, I love Cheelai, I LOVED this damn movie. And this story? It was catharsis, yes.

Thank you so much. :')

AH I LOVE THEM SO MUCH!

I need more Broly and Cheelai in my life!
I need to see little green half-Saiyans!

Cheelai's an alien, she can probably stretch!

Mah heart... Mah soul...

This was ridiculously adorable. And, also really heartstring-tugging Like, come on, "Now Ba can hug you."? God man that almost hurt to read with how sweet it was.

And the dialogue all felt really genuine; that great way where you can effortlessly hear the character's actual voice in your head. Fantastic.

Aw, this is perfect! I love it!

As soon as I finished watching the movie, I came to this site in search of any Broly/Cheelai fics, and this fanfic did NOT disappoint! What a heartwarming story and I enjoyed the growing relationship between these two. I liked the focus on Paragus' death and how Broly was able to recognize that despite what happened with his dad, he knew he could move on and be his own person without any further influence from his old man. Well done!

So cute! Hope you can do more chapters!

Aw, that was really sweet. I enjoyed this :)

u made me tear up, this is beyond cute! you are amazing writer! I love every word, and how accurate their characteristics were! great job!

Oh my gosh! I loved this so much! I really hope you continue! I so desperately want to see Broly and Cheelai’s relationship grow! Thank you for writing this!

AHHHH MY HEART! Awesome story great work!

Finally I've seen the movie so I was interested in a broly cheelai story... and I have to say it's very good u picked paragus' death as a main topic in this OS cuz I think in the movie it just appeared as a minor thing frieza did so... both characters really seem like out of the movie. cheelai as some space bulma and broly.. I don't know especially with his fur he sometimes seems like a saiyan tarzan :D my favorite part was the part where broly said his final words to his father.. very well written i hope to read more of this pairing from u soon :)

Fffffffffffff*CK that was cute! I wanted at least one little bit of wholesome content to satisfy my new appreciation for this ship, and this did splendidly. I don't know if anything else could do as well as this did. So yeah, good job.