Reviews for The doors of Home |
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Phantasmal Sword Immortal chapter 1 . 12/1/2019 Please write more |
GamerX568 chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 Not the best grammar, but a very interesting idea and story. I hope you plan to write more. |
jtdjtdjt chapter 1 . 9/2/2019 greatstory, thanks ;) can't wait for more. please continue |
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 1/31/2019 Awesome |
MegaKittyX chapter 1 . 1/24/2019 This is a great story! I hope you continue it! |
Josie chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 Hi, the story is sounding really good, however, the giant block of text about halfway through the story is horrific to get through. There really needs to be some breaks mixed in, like with conversations and topic changes. This will just help it be easier to read. |
TimelessFox42 chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 This is turning out good. :) |
TRGrene chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 Needs better formatting the wall of text in the middle make sit hard to read. |
CushySensei chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 seriously!? Xovers between Naruto/HP/GOT? |