Hey I don’t want to be rude but in the future you should check your grammar before posting it makes the story hard to read

chapters are to short, and its kind of a jumbled mess, percy seems to know a bit about earth despite having never been there

hey I don’t want to be rude but you need to check your grammar it makes it hard to read

Woah!

Exist an New chapter or is this the end.

Fucking hell. Edit your fucking story - and stop using “Like” so much. You had no full-stops, no commas and so many capital letters out of place that it looked like everyone was yelling. Thor is old fashioned, literally, and as such DOES NOT USE LIKE!

Nice! Really liking the story so far; can't wait for another update! Also, this is a tiny mistake but Rhodey's name is actually James Rhodes - Rhodey is his nickname.

Sooooooo good

Nice! Please continue !

Ahhh have you no heart to leave it at a place like this!

Ooh intriguing!