Reviews for Sword Art Kingdom III
Sheng-long chapter 11 . 21h
I love this story but I was thinking of two other anime you could use as worlds in this fanfic. They are Date A Live and Magi. It is just a thought, but seeing how those characters interact with the story would be interesting.
Andy Mei chapter 11 . 7/23
I just found out on your Deviant page that you've been in a terrible car accident, sorry to hear that (why didn't I check there sooner?!). Please take your time to recover and keep your hopes up. Then hopefully you can continue your totally awesome SAK franchise.
donnelld764 chapter 11 . 7/17
I was thinking about the 2018 god of war that would be a ok addition to the story
Pyro chapter 11 . 7/15
Maybe you could add Injustice: Gods Among Us. The gang gets caught in the middle with the war between the Insurgency plus the prime universe Justice League and the One Earth Regime. Everyone, especially Kirito, would learn how Regime Superman has fallen deep into darkness because of his loss. Kirito would realize that he's probably be just like him if the same happened to Asuna and Yui.
Bobby Briggs chapter 1 . 7/15
When are you going to start posting more chapters again? It's been a while.
J the Abarekiller chapter 1 . 7/14
Ok, full disclosure I haven’t gotten to this story yet, but, if you want some suggestions of a couple worlds you can put the gang into if you aren’t finished with the gang traveling through worlds. Uh, suggestions i have are Casshern Sins, Kikaider the Animation (if you have seen these two that is, if not then please do so they are really good), Dragon Ball Z (whether the Namek Saga or Android Saga. Either one works or one of the movies), maybe some mecha shows like Gundam, or maybe American shows like Samurai Jack. And maybe some others i can suggest.
colossalblackening chapter 10 . 7/2
Hey there. I've been rereading your SAK series since the pandemic began. At the same time, I was also playing KH 1.5 2.5 and 2.8 (since it came out for Xbox One). I'm currently playing KH3 once more and with each world I'm doing, it's making me look forward to how you will do them in you SAK3 story.

One world I'm looking forward to seeing is Arendelle and how you implement Kirito, Asuna, and Yui into the story. Like how Sora could relate to Anna, I can see Asuna relating to her more about wanting to save your older sister and reconnect with them. Kirito however will definitely see a lot of himself in Elsa (someone who believes they are a danger others and shutting themselves away in isolation). In fact, I see Kirito being the focal hero for the Arendelle arc, even confronting Larxene. I also hope you give Hans a more prominent role in your story.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/16
ArkGhost, I think you forgot about another villain the author made named Younsol and he alongside Xehanort is a main antagonist of the SAK series. Plus, this is just my opinion, but I think it would be best if both Xehanort and Younsol would just strike Kairi down because according to KHIII Re:Mind, Xehanort struck her down not only to motivate Sora into attacking him, but also because Kairi is one of the Princesses of Heart and he was going to use the fragments of her heart as a last resort to probably open Kingdom Hearts again in case he fails to defeat Sora and the others. And I don't think both him and Younsol would have any interest in Yui since she is not one of the princesses. So, it's best if Sora travels alone to save Kairi and disappear after he does so, only for Riku, Kirito, Asuna, and possibly Leafa (since she is Sora's dimensional counterpart in the SAK series) to try and find him through their dreams.
Red John chapter 11 . 6/15
I can't help but wonder if you plan to include the execution of Malty and the King. Actually, I hear that the trial of the King and Malty differs between the anime and novel.

In the novel, Naofumi immediately demanded their execution and while the queen didn't reject it, she provided the alternative to change their names and strip them of their status. At this point, Naofumi realizes the real threat of the wave (after witnessing Glass' strength and Fitoria's demand) and agreed to it only to avoid making any more new enemies, though he chose the names Trash and Bitch.

Since you're following the anime, during the execution, Kirito and Asuna can be the ones to convince Naofumi to spare them. While they agree that Malty is a horrible person and deserves retribution for all she's done, they convince him not to fall to her level, like with Raphtalia and Idol. I'd also like to use Team Keyblader's reaction to their name changes.

This humiliation and disgrace can lead to Malty to become consumed by her hate and anger that her heart finally succumbs to darkness, similar to Mother Gothel and Prince Hans.
ArkGhost chapter 11 . 6/13
I've have been reading the sword art kingdom story's all of the they've been nothing but interesting you know I've been thinking about Sora,Asuna,and Kirito all being trap in the final world and I think I know how Xehanort will strike down Kairi and Yui in front of the trio in order to create the X-blade they battle and defeat Xehanort and use the power of waking one last time to save Kairi and Yui they all disappear Riku and Leafa have dreams about them and they all follow the into Yozora world I can't wait to see how the battle of Sora, Asuna, and Kirito Vs Yozora, Anaza, And Kibou I bet when you continue it will be amazing
Spider rider55 chapter 1 . 6/13
So PhiliaxKairixSora can you do a three way pairing
Guest chapter 11 . 6/11
Great chapter can't wait to read the next one
Guest chapter 11 . 6/5
I really hope you have the Goetria Heartless end up being the Pope’s downfall. I really hate the fact that he believes his religion is bringing peace to the world when it's in fact bring chaos instead. He also acts so oblivious to the consequences of his actions. I really hope you have his ego get destroyed before killing him when the Goetria steals his power. As much as I hate to admit it, but Young Xehanort was right about one thing. Some people’s light is nothing but a farce as darkness lurks within their heart instead. The Pope is a prime example of that.

Also, do you plan to give Sora a new Keyblade to use after the heroes are done with this world? It’s been two worlds in Kirito’s dimension already, and Sora hasn’t gained a new Keyblade from any of them. I would be kind of disappointed if you didn’t. It would be a great opportunity to give Sora new formchanges to use so that he could get stronger.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/31
It would be cool to see Sora, Kirito, and Asuna fight Yozora, Kibou, and Anaza. But I think I have an idea for them meeting each other. What if a year after Sora dissapeared, Kirito and Asuna somehow reunite with him while they are sleeping making them think that they could be in a dream or that it is real. Then, that's when they hear three voices and when they approach them, they'll be shocked to see them being real people. Anyway, I hope I'll see what Kibou and Anaza will look like and what their weapons and powers are.
donnelld764 chapter 9 . 5/31
Can asuna and kirito have a warp strike ability
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