| Reviews for The Invincible Whitley Schnee |
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   GhostCXR chapter 12 . 7/18 Just read the entire thing and it is currently 5:30 AM where I live. I haven’t slept. This fic is amazing |
| Avalon gx chapter 12 . 7/15 When the festival happens will that be when the avengers are born. |
| Aartorias chapter 1 . 7/9 So basically, Iron man Rip-off. Gotcha. |
| Aztec 13 chapter 12 . 7/4 I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, hey will you do 90s Ironman intro with the hammer and anvil and use the hammer and anvil to build new armor, please continue |
| tsun chapter 12 . 7/3 long chapter. good pacing? I dont know. to be honest. too long introduction and so little in the iron man plot. I've read the spider man jaune fic and it's easily to be hook to it. it has nice pacing of drama, action and plot. this? too much mystery and drama and little to no actions . still good story telling otherwise. just slow in the iron man stuff. |
| superpierce chapter 12 . 7/1 Great chapter |
| nathanfromschool chapter 3 . 6/30 What’s the difference between Semblances and superheroes? |
| nathanfromschool chapter 2 . 6/30 It’s like you just took a scene from the movie and renamed the characters. Idk just seems...weird. |
| Anhilliator1 chapter 12 . 6/30 I have the oddest feeling that Neon and Flynt are going to follow Whitley, and walk in on him during a maintenance/inventing spree. |
| bauers374 chapter 12 . 6/29 I'm hoping we do have a scene where he does the whole... "Truth is... I am Iron Man" scene |
| Raidentensho chapter 12 . 6/29 very nice. so a bit of the "Armored Adventures" series will be in this via villains like "Living Laser" and "The Mandarin"(the armored form is epic) ? now that would indeed be something. looking forward to more. until then, later! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/29 What is the pairing? |
| Starlord Master chapter 12 . 6/29 A vampire Granny? Nice. |
| RockyGolem chapter 12 . 6/29 Nice |
| Dcraus chapter 1 . 6/28 Flynt is going to be War Machine |
