cool story see you next year...

Interesting concept, needs more chapters.

I really like the story, please make him abandon louise as the brat that she is and make him go on adventures on halkeginia while trying to go home or at least try to communicate with it, in the end louise is nothing but a tsundere obstacle with no redeeming qualities whatsoever. Go for the mercenary or explorer route.

I hope you will keep writing, this story has potential

Nice stuff hope you still updating
Just want to say if MC is talking in English, Colbert or someone could've identify it as Albion language

Cool story.

I'm really enjoying the story. there are a few parts where you forget to finish your sentences though… otherwise, it's a good story

What? No armor?

a guy gets sent to another world and ends up in a harem or something… Carlos my friend, you have no idea.

great chapter, I'm really enjoying your story. I look forward to seeing what you have in mind for the dynamic between Louise and Carlos.

in terms of criticism, a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing detracting from the story itself.

keep up the great work!

love the choice of character. look forward to reading more

Update already dad.

You did an amazing job on this one! I really like all the different options you've come up with for the suit!

Xenos tech and Abominable Intelligences?
*BLAM* TECH HERESY!

Is this based on The Power Armor CYOA?