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Monokromatic chapter 3 . 7/11 Sry it's me again I was like fk this fic is so good and I was like wait too good, and I read the comments and I see my babbling lmfao (: thank you for writing this again! |
Monokromatic chapter 14 . 5/24 Claps hard THANK you SO HARD |
Monokromatic chapter 10 . 5/24 Your lemon is SO HEAVEN AHHHH he's such a tease! |
Monokromatic chapter 8 . 5/24 Omfg sesshomaru so mean lol that last sentence |
Monokromatic chapter 7 . 5/24 Omfg you wrote that cry scene so perfectly holyg shrit like it was SO SESSHOMARUU |
angeljme chapter 6 . 5/20 I actually thought that once Sesshomaru had an inkling of his feelings for Rin, that he would try to deny it. But I guess, I have to consider that he's been in denial for so very long, that this is actually the time to face it. And with his I-don't-give-an-eff to anybody save for Rin, and my-way-or-the-high-way attitude, yes, he would just jump off the cliff, decision made and pursue it with all of him. |
angeljme chapter 5 . 5/20 I knew it! Jaken is the father figure... or mother-hen with all the yelling he does, hehehe |
angeljme chapter 3 . 5/20 Ooooohhh, I love slow burn. Just keep everyone in character and let them develop and write their own path. |
LP Luna Phantom chapter 14 . 4/3 I'm not complaining about the ending, but I want you to know that after I finished reading this one last chapter I went to the "Next " button only to discover there was no such button! I hadn't realized there were only 14 chapters on the story. Anyway, great job! I truly loved it! |
Ranny Miotty chapter 14 . 12/2/2019 I liked to read your history. I do believe both of them act this way. I read some histories which Rin act like a warrior and I confess this do not gets me so much. I like the old e simple Rin, because it was this for the she cached his heart in the original. Thanks for shared your thoughts. |
Luin-fanel chapter 14 . 11/21/2019 WOW!, My first time reading you, so, I didn't expect this as the end, but it's ok for me, I really enjoy all the story, from morning today, I think you describe the characters very well, I definitely can see these two acting just like that. Thanks a lot for sharing it! I think I'll be searching for more fics about this pair, can't do anything about it, my kids start watching the show a month ago or so and... well... I wasn't a fan of Sesshomaru and Rin the first time I watch Inuyasha, but, one grow older and see things different. Anyways, thanks a lot for the story, it's really a pity it ends here but, well, you are the writer, you decide and I as reader only enjoy. SARABA |
LunnaBR chapter 14 . 7/20/2019 hiii.. i only read complete fics nowadays (after having two that i really like unfinished for over a decade..) and i really liked yours! i will keep following you! |
elohiniar chapter 14 . 6/24/2019 Very cute story. I like that you were able to finish it. |
elohiniar chapter 7 . 6/24/2019 Not to point out grammar mistakes but I like her dementor ;). |
AdriJ254 chapter 14 . 6/19/2019 Lmao I’d be shook if I saw that |