Reviews for What I saw
NotNecessarilyInThatOrder chapter 1 . 2/9/2019
Nice little comfort bit from Arthur at the end there. That was nice. Are you going to expand on this story at all? Maybe with the dragon eggs? If you do I have one suggestion: Separating more of you sentences will make your story easier to read. Especially dialogue, anytime a person speaks what they say needs to be written separate from the other paragraphs. That way it stands out and is easier to follow. Besides that, you did a good job, thanks for sharing. :)