This is a precious diamond in terms of history.
The moment Asuka realizes her feelings was perfect done in caracter and Shinji actions are changing not tô fast and in a way that IS true to his caracter.
The way Asuka is manipulating Shinji is Fun she make the choices but she don't go to the point of hurting him.
This is a beautiful story and one of my favorites.
THANK YOU for sharing this AWESOME work.

Wow AWESOME chapter
This not a fate idea of Asuka was brilliant i need a Lot more of this, but make Shinji do something to make Asuka keep interest.
The dynamics of the two in this chapter was really well done and interesting.
THANK YOU for sharing this AWESOME work.

This is really good. You managed to almost perfectly capture the voice and personality of the characters, and that is honestly the most difficult part about writing EVA fanfiction.

Hope you make more.

Honestly, tbis is a really neat offshoot that stabds pretty well of its own accord.

I like Two Souls as well and look forward to seeing more, b-but I wouldn't hate seeing more of th-th-this b-b-b-baka.

Aww, now that was nice. From those awkward first few tries to just going with the flow (especially those last two parts), it was a trip well worth taking. Looking forward to any further side-tales in this vein.

I liked this first chapter, Asuka more or less feels like she is in-character, to me.

Thanks for the story, looking forward to seeing where it goes.