Yang secretly wants to fuck her daddy. I envy Jaune that he can fuck Blake and Yang.

Taiyang, you disappoint me. At least traumatize your children in a more respectable manner.

Holy shit I wasn't expecting that ending. I think I need a minute to let my lungs stop aching from laughter, great job man this is one in a million.

Interesting. Like to see continued.

More Knightshade Bumblebee and Dragonslayer!

Nice to see a bit more of Blake this time. Kind of weirded out by this version of Summer.

Well, you said it, Yang. You said it.

On Folk And Nem, this was a classic chapter. I couldn't hold my laughter between Summer acting like a serious balloonhead. To be a redhead, she was acting like a total blonde. I always knew that Yang was a freak. Blake was acting kind of gangster in this chapter. On 's grave, she was. Jaune kept it cool and Lie Ren being one of the boys as usual. I love this chapter. Can't wait for more.

I have really enjoyed this chapter. Initially, I was thinking it would be nothing more than orgies between the trio but you are showing different sides with each character.

For starters, Blake. I've really enjoyed how you allowed her to show and convey her openness with close friends. Being able to be yourself is the only way to show love to yourself. However, I also love how she isn't open with others. For a woman particularly in that culture, being part of the LGBT community is close to death. What I find ironic is that Blake is a Faunus. Faunus are already facing issues with their counterparts. If you are comparing Blake's Faunus to being a POC, I can see the correlation between the two. If that is the case, then I do applaud your attempts to include it. I am managing to see that Blake is also serving as the devil's advocate when it comes to girls. She is playing both sides. Girls she doesn't perceive as a threat, she does nothing. However, girls that brings insecurity to her, she rings the alarm. However, at the end of the day, Blake is only doing this because she is protective of her lovers. If that isn't commitment, then I don't know what is.

Jaune, the hero of the tale. I enjoyed his role in this character. He was subtle, humble. I didn't see any kinks in his armor. Even as the beautiful Summer came to approach him, he didn't show any signs of temptation (although a moment of weakness after complementing her butt. Yet again, he was being a man). Jaune still manages to display his constitution towards Lie Ren and playing his role of best friend. He lets Lie Ren know that he doesn't allow his polygamy to question his feelings for other women. In his mind, this isn't a harem but a serious relationship. I also love how he somewhat plays the a fatherly role to Summer (at least in my opinion).

My poor friend, Lie Ren. What did overstudying do to you, my friend. As if he exchanged his role of studious, stern learner to otaku, girl crazy, pot-smoking despot. A strong word but it definitely contrast his canon. However, he is a likeable character. The constant jabs between friends. No hard feelings between the two and their relationship is pure and strong. There are no ulterior moments. You can tell that Jaune enjoys Lie Ren and Lie Ren enjoys Jaune. True friendship indeed. I wish Lie Ren well with women. In that department, he needs the help.

We didn't see much of Yang in this chapter. We definitely know for sure that Yang is a hypersexual bohemian. I haven't seen a fanfic like this for Yang but I love it. She isn't afraid to explore herself. She is still highly protective of her lovers. I love that she uses her love for sex as an occupation. My dear author, maybe you should do that for Yang. I don't see any protest of her doing that. Besides, it is more of art than lust. Yet again, it serves as lust on Yang's end.

Finally, Summer. She plays the role of dumb blonde very well. To be a woman in her forties, she acts very childish. I definitely see her being a supportive character in the series. I saw that she popped in unannounced in Blake and Jaune's private moment. I found it adorable. Instead of getting her or calling the police, they treat her like any parent does to a child. I really hope to see Ruby in this, especially when you have thrown hints in the chapter. I love how she was sporting a mustache as Autumn. Reminds me of Teen Titans' Starfire as Jeff (her alter ego).

Anyway, these are quite colorful characters that you have shown us in this chapter. I do look forward to seeing more RWBY (and maybe even MHA characters) in this series. Hopefully, you can bring Neo, Willow, maybe Sienna. I hope you can bring Izuku as well (possibly as a cameo). Those are my opinions. Anyway, keep up the great work! I hope to see more classical works from you in the near future. Until next chapter!

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Ok I laughed the hell out of this chapter! And Summer is killing me! Great chapter keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update.

Hey, Big Diesel. I have finished your story and I must say that I am astounded by this work. To think this could be a classic and has the least amount of followers it deserves. You have Yang, the happy-go-lucky, couldn't give a damn perverted type. She is a free spirit and doesn't let life slow her down. Then, there is Blake. Although reserved and protective, she still manages to be comfortable around her lovers. I can tell that she is closer to Yang (since they were dating prior to the OT3) but I do know that she loves Jaune dearly. What I think you are leading to is that Blake's love for Jaune is different. But, there is a much stronger love and I believe when it comes, it will be more fruitful. I look forward when seeing Blake and Jaune blossoming more. Then, there is Jaune. The center of the craziness. It seems to me that he is the most levelheaded member of the group. He tries balances out work, school, and his relationship the best way possible. However, he still comes across his own challenges (especially when he gets high and supposedly watches his nephew, causing him to get lost under his watch). You know he loves his girlfriends equally and always have their back at the end of the day. So far, Jaune serves more as the voice of reason. Lie Ren is going to become a likeable. I can imagine him he is the typical the burnt out character, studying too long at Beacon caused him to become a easily relaxed stoner. He is definitely the best friend and straight man. He still has alot to learn about relationships of the OT3 but I can tell that he will be a great supporting character in the series. As for Glynda, the nemesis. The woman that will be the pain to everyone's spine. She plays her role well, berating and belittling the main character. You know there is tension and I can tell that it is more than meets the eye. I have a feeling that Glynda is here to stay and I am looking forward to it. What I am now anticipating are the roles of Summer and Taiyang. Where do they fit in? I can speculate Summer being the ditzy, girl-next-door who will become nosy and always pops up unannounced. Taiyang? He will serve as a minor but memorable character, especially after "getting off" unknowingly to his own daughter. After seeing Yang "getting off," I definitely know that Yang is more open to anything. Let's find out. Anyway, that is my point of view of the series so far. It is a great read and honestly, quite refreshing. I look forward to seeing more of your works in the future, Big Diesel! XXX-A Random Critic

Is Jaune related to Aural Honey? I say that because she detests Oreos and coffee. She calls it soulless. Anyway, I accidentally stumbled upon this fic and I have fallen in love with the series. Keep up the good work!

Ha! Nice, I'm loving this version of Yang she's funny to me personally because she is so similar to a friend of mine. Ren as well. Keep up the good job. Your doing great.

Funny chapter! This reminds me of a parody I saw YouTuber itsreal85. Looks like the studious Ren has been burnt out. Seeing Jaune and Ren getting high was funny. Adrian finding a toy and Jaune sniffs it and know it is Yang's? Hilarious! Why do I sense Blake's parents against them? Also Summer being a dumb blonde! I knew Yang was the pervert. Man, release these as soon as you can. This is comedy gold my dear author!

Ok wtf Yang wtf that is just sick. Still i loved stoner Jaune and Ren funny as hell keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter update.