Gotta say this is my favorite of this series of one shots. Love how you portrayed Alice's state of mind, with only certain words & Neville's presence getting through.

Sad little one-shot and thanks for sharing!

Fucking hell man! That was beautifully cruel

Hi there! Both of these little stories are so heartfelt and the emotions feel raw. I really enjoyed getting to see a little bit of what Andromeda might be thinking and feeling. The idea of extra benches being added to the graveyard for the survivors really hit me hard!

I usually try to add some kind of constructive criticism in my reviews, but I enjoyed both so much that nothing stood out. Your punctuation and grammar is strong!

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A surprising find for Andromeda. Thanks for sharing!

Good first chapter and quite emotional. Thanks for sharing!

Touching and heartfelt chapter. I understand that you don't want to make this story about Harry's love life but could you maybe reference he and Andromeda being together while still having the main moments be about emotional family moments?

Fucking Hell man! Why must you insist on hitting me in the feels!

And fuck. The end of this chapter makes my chest tight, and if my version of Harry and Ted read this, they would get along. Damn dude, the feels.

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Aww super sweet

why do you have to make me tear up like that?

Such a short story to bring on the tears!
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

This was actually really nice, but it seems more in line with JacobApples 'What We Lost' and 'Found in the Ashes' stories. All in all good job.

Touching.
I wouldn't mind more at all.