Snape as a fae...how interesting :D

Awww noooo! Not the end! Come back and love us!

If this is just a one shot, we’re missing out. You are delightful in your writing and visual cues. Please write more when you have time.

oohh man.. that was intense *.* excellent job! loved it!

I want so much more of this story. I always feel that way about one shots... there's never enough

Loved it!

Very unique, I like it!

Lovely! I like the description of her gown as well as how you bring them together.

Thank you! I’m so thirsty and that story was a small oasis in a large desert. I’m very partial to the idea of far but hadn’t seen it worked into many stories. Usually people use vampires or veelas or werewolves; never fae. Would it be to presumptuous of me to beg you to write something similar but longer? Pretty please? Four Checks for this story!

Sensuously and enticing. Loved this.

How sweet!

Okay so first I just have to share that for some really weird reason when I saw SS/HG my mind went to "Salazar Slytherin" which would be one heck of an AU so I was very confused but ANYWAY

I'm not a big fan of how this pairing usually gets written out, but I have to say that there was something compelling about the power tug between Hermione and Snape here, and I loved it. You crafted the dialogue so well that there was a very palpable tension that I could practically see. I also enjoyed how even though this is a one-shot, you didn't really spend a lot of exposition on explaining the whole fae thing. It was a good touch that made me feel like it was a part of something bigger.

If I have to nitpick one thing that you could maybe improve, some of Hermione's phrasing seems a tiny bit off, but I can't really place why and it's not critically important anyway, just something to play with if you choose to revisit this.

From looking at this, I think you'd be really awesome for this website that I write for. It's basically an entire magical school full of OCs, and the community is just fantastically fun and supportive (and mostly post-college, animal obsessed, so I think you'll fit right in). You've definitely got the skill set and I would love to write with you, so you should check it out - rmimagic . com!

This was a really fun story that I wouldn't mind reading more of but it did have a satisfying end as well.

This is pretty cool. Glad you decided to share.

Oh man! I loved it! I want more! I’m very greedy!