| Reviews for The Baby |
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  Guest chapter 17 . 3/22 I Love |
 cheetahkit chapter 17 . 2/24 Are you ever going to reveal where Emma came from? Is she from the future and Marinette's/Adrien's daughter? |
| Face Yourself chapter 10 . 9/16/2019 Wait, how is this day 18 when chapter 2 was day 22? Granted, timeskipping 3 weeks forward from when she was given Emma was a bit strange, but it did frame the story decently well. Showing that the original estimate of only having her a single week was far, far from what happened without having to go much into it, and such. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/20/2019 Omg I love this |
| Jane the fan chapter 17 . 7/28/2019 This is too much! Please continue! |
| MajorPain67 chapter 17 . 7/28/2019 Yay alyas back! |
| CaptainMalcolmReynolds chapter 17 . 7/28/2019 Wow! An action packed chapter... but I did love that ending! |
| Angel Talon chapter 17 . 7/28/2019 Um, you poster this chapter twice now... |
| MajorPain67 chapter 16 . 6/27/2019 Gosh this is so good! You're so talented! |
| CaptainMalcolmReynolds chapter 16 . 6/27/2019 Ugh. It's terrible that Lila and Gabriel make such a good team... but YAY! Ladybug is free! |
| IDidn'tSignUp4This chapter 16 . 6/26/2019 Woah! That was crazy awesome! |
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/15/2019 If Lila kidnapped Marinette, why is she so happy to suddenly hear that she went missing? She already knows. |
| TheAmazingFireshadow chapter 1 . 6/15/2019 To the person asking why Lila was happy to hear that Marinette went missing: this story is pre-reveal, and Lila kidnapped Marinette while she was Ladybug. Lila doesn't know what happened to Marinette because as far as she knows, the only disappearance she's responsible for is Ladybug's. Hope that helps and I promise to publish the next chapter in a few days! |
| IDidn'tSignUp4This chapter 15 . 5/7/2019 Yesss! Chat, you are right! Go and save your girl! And I honestly have no clue what the whole Foreshadowing-business was about. Sorry |
| Toshiro of the Eternal Dream chapter 15 . 5/7/2019 You know Ayla scene was harsh, but did show how much more of Bitch Alya really is, considering all her examples were ebcuase Ladybug couldn't get out fo the way or in the case of puppeteer, basically didn't get his doll, and for style queen he was hit before he could transform. Copycat, Alya basicly assumed along with others in paris he went rouge and no one but chat and ladybug and hawkmouth actually know how it ended, and for the first go around, it's was he said their first go around, and ayla herself has hampered them and forced cat to bed efenseless during that. Ayla has never apoligsed just like majority of paris for turning against him quickly and evne on Hero's Day, all of paris was more focused on Ladybg's supposed Akumatised State, rather than the murder of Chat Noir. Frankly due to Lilla's involemnt and such and how ayla reacts towards everything, I'm hoping you expand this and have Adiren whether be hero or civilian side, snap at her, and not just her but everyone. I hope you manag to have it where Chat actually is th emain hero this time, because I feel like that while they emant to be equals, Marrionate is given too much freedom and sicne she is trapped, I'm hoping this goes well. No matter what, keep writing. |
