Please I need more

I hate the grandfather. Literally hate. Maybe it's a difference in culture, but had that been my grandfather he would have been sent to live on his own or in a old people home as soon as I was able to pay for it. And with her job she would have been able to pay for it.

No one needs to suffer all that emotional abuse and manipulation, especially when it comes from family. Perhaps your Miya just lacks backbone or any sense of independence at all. Which I guess I can understand if she had to grow up with that abusive piece of shit grandpa. And he's abusive. Even if it's from a purely emotional abuse standpoint. There's no redeeming for that piece of shit in my books. Let him die in the grave he's dug: alone and bitter.

Seriously if that was me I would have left that piece of shit as soon as I was independent. The fact that Miya didn't and just kept letting him abuse her pisses me off. I like the story premise even tho the lack of her independence pisses me off so I shall continue reading.

This is in no way an offense to you as a writer. Congrats on writing a character that can get an emotional response out of me. It's just one of pure hate.

Plssss update! I’m way to invested with this story! Ahhhh

Ridiculous just like overhaul said no sees the big picture they just focus on their own tiny piece of justice. mere sentimentalism. she probably saved more lives as a doctor and her research would surely help even more than several heroes in their entire lives

I'm absolutely in love with this story, each chapter just keeps getting better! The way you develop and characterize each character is so well done. Thank you for all the updates!

Excellent story! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Love your story! Hope you continue!

I've been enjoying reading this fanfiction

Not only you make Miya likable, but I also love the fact that you added foreign culture here which I have to give you applause for because fanfiction writers rarely brought religious elements. It's very refreshing! I have a suggestion though. I think you should write a chapter that is full of Aizawa centric, it might give interesting insights for the reader. Because personally, it kind of giving me dissatisfaction when you suddenly changed Miya's perspective to Aizawa briefly. Why? Because this story is soooo good and it was a painful blow for me when you only write Aizawa's perspective really briefly especially in this chapter ;_;

Also, have you read Vigilante? Aizawa's past especially. I think it will help you to understand Aizawa's character more and his development. Man, he's one of the best-developed characters in this series.

Hi there! I’m sooo glad I was looking for Aizawa/oc stories after watching a few episodes of My Hero Academia Season 4 and stumbled upon this book! Season 4 so far is kind of disappointing tbh. Honestly after the last season and everything I felt like Izuku is still the same person since the beginning. Idk if it’s just me or not. But I just don’t see that much character development even tho his character did develop of course. Still felt like he was the same at the same time.
This book is amazing! It is tiring seeing the same bland OC and seeing your Biracial unique OC was a breath of fresh air. I love her background, her new discoveries about her quirk and her family, and her developing relationship with Aizawa! Your OC is perfect! I love the direction the story is going! I’m just wondering if she’ll also ever get to meet her mother in the far off future and if we haven’t seen her quirk fully? Can she possibly take energy and life away from things? Like cause some sort of decay? Since she is able to map out a persons body, can she mess with parts of it like their quirk? Or like suck away and sap off their quirk? Or even block it off since Aizawa talked about a energy in his body while he was healing? Like block it off using her energy? Would that be possible?
Anyways, I hope you are able to continue this story. But with what today is like with the global pandemic, I hope you are safe and healthy and your family and loved ones are too. Overall, this is a amazing read! So I hope until next time! If that’s possible.:-)

How was she alive during the second world war? Unless history is different in this universe

I'm really loving this so far! I have no complaints, keep up the good work!

I love it I love it I love it! I hope we get an update soon! I love Miya, and the cute moments she has with Aizawa, and I love her quirk and he personality, and her bravery not only in her hero work but when she had the courage to call out her grandpa and actually leave! And I love that you made the most amazing biracial character I've seen in a while!
I almost thought her hero name would be Mahnez, but I like that Vita-girl is a play on Recovery girl (I feel like she deserves more recognition for all that she does for those kids lol)
Keep up the amazing work! I hope we get an update soon!

This was a great chapter! Aizawa likes Miya and he hasn't fully noticed it yet! I liked Miya and Aizawa's banter. Well it's more Miya than Aizawa, but still loved it! I think Miya should tell someone she is being followed. I know she thinks it's in her mind but this recent incident has confirmed it to me. I look forward to the next chapter. Sorry it took so long to read this chapter. I haven't had a chance to sit down relax and read up on some great stories. Also I think you're doing a great job with Miya and Aizawa!

I’m happy I had the time to finally sit down and read the latest chapter whew. As I always say your characterization of Aizawa is spot on. He’s such a rational no nonsense guy that I would imagine him having difficulties pinpointing his budding affections. His inner thoughts on Miya were to be expected as he views her as a person and her potential as a hero. Secretly I believe he likes when she teases him. I really wish Miya speaks up about the odd dreams and people watching her, especially since her grandfather has already sold her out. I can only imagine how THAT arc will play out. Great chapter again & I’m always looking forward to your writing.

Aizawa is adorable when he's disgruntled and flustered. He's in this constant loop of 'Why am I bothered? Why should I be bothered?' during the stakeout while he rationalizes out his sudden unexplainable reaction to Miya's offhand comment.

Poor Miya got sold out by her Grandpa. I wonder if she was being warned by the other side of family via quirk, hence the language barrier in her dreams.