That was a great story scenarios that you have made, and I really enjoyed it! And I do hope you can make another Senran Kagura story like this, if possible, with mature content on it. Maybe like an after story of this where it gets mature and stuff. Other than that, keep it up!

harem final aternative, nice story

nice

Great chapter, also it's onee-chan, not onii-chan. Onii-chan is for boys while onee-chan is for girls. You might need to fix that.

why'd you delete mirai and murakumo?

Short, but great! Keep up the good work!

nice! XD

This looks to be an interesting story. I like it, and I can't wait to see who's going first!

It's just my opinion, but I think you should start from one team members of the shinobi girls, from the last to the leader, like for example, the Gessen girls, starting from Minori to Yumi. And if possible, you should start it in order teams, starting from Hanzo to new Hebijo. Or if you want, you can just start at random based on which girls you think is from the least to the best. Again, it's just my opinion, but that's up to you. Anyway, good luck with your new story!