Please update

Lucy's grin widened even more as she wrapped her arms around Zane's and pressed it in between her massive breasts

S-class mage Shiva of fairy tail.

whos Shiva and Zane.

Not bad, I like both of your stories. Hope to see an update soon!

there is a couple misstypes for natsu name as zane for some reason

also why did you skip the lemon or lime please don't that its a huge pet peeve of mine when authors skip them lols

besides that im looking forward to seeing more of the story op natsu some changes and if every possible waifu is in the harem and all the limes and lemons

Great chapter! I can't wait for Mira to be with Natsu!
Can't wait to read more!
Hopefully you can update soon!

Really looking forward to the next update.
I really wanna Anna to be in this harem please! There aren't much of them out there.
Also, Hopefully you will add Wendy, there has to be a loli in the harem, right?...
Although if you add more than one loli it would be awesome *cough* Chelia *cough*

Good start. Your action scenes are pretty good considering your strong point seems to be smut imo. Having Kuroka as his partner was also a nice touch. I think this story could be even better if you focused more on the action and have lemon maybe every other chapter. But thats just my opinion. Anyway, keep it coming.

Gentlemen...It's time.

Yeah just the stupid amount of au in the first authors note put me off because those things your excluding in the past made the world what it is and by reading the chapter i can tell you don't have the knowledge or skill to show what massive changes there would be to the world without those events.

Fingers crossed for Levy.

The porn could be fine but if the plot is just a rehash of canon I'll drop this real fast. I'm interested to see what you change and go from there. Not the first fairy tail fic like this (I seem to be saying that alot but with this fandom it's almost always a repeat of the same style) so being creative will do you wonders for those who aren't just won over by the fact your giving him a gaggle of girls.

I love this all the way Natsu dragon could be a 3 inches bigger but still good.

Men of Culture Unite!

I almost forgot to say that I agree with you about Jellal/Erza pairing are simply disgusting.

What's this?! A porn with plot? Impossible! Simply impossible...

Anyways, all jokes aside, can't wait for what this story has in store for us all. I really like how shy Aquarius gets when she meet with Natsu. And I really hope Levy is in the harem, need to have some petite woman in there for some diversity. (She got some great ass though.)

Well, that's about it I guess, hope you have a nice week.