I aways love happy end Petunia and kind Petunia. I am support Pet x Sev and Pet x Siri but Remud and her is nice

Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #5

Examiner: Kyrie

Grade: 20/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback: "Petunia Evans:It's really interesting how you were able to take a negative trait of Petunia's and use it to get to a more tolerant nature. I really enjoyed reading through her troubles with jealousy and the way she overcame it here was both inspiring and really well deserved, especially since she ended up marrying someone she loved wholly. I really liked the characterisation. Well done! The interactions you've written in were mostly between Petunia and Lily. I found them to be very personal and had a lot to do with mixed emotions. You did well in conveying that in their relationship as family.I found this story to be very original. I've never seen Petunia be used as the main focus for a canon-divergent story and it was really new and interesting for me to read about it in this general flow of the story was great. The pacing was neither too fast nor too slow, and the prose was written very beautifully. There was no dialogue at all, but the emotive prose did a really good job conveying what words also could have. Great work!The prompt was used fully and throughout the story. I found your use of the prompt to have a big impact on the story, and the way you used the prompt was both unique and plot wasn't too detailed, but I love the way you were able to use that to introduce details that you'd created for this story. It really accentuated all the changes you'd made from canon, and it really ended up reading well.I loved this story. It was beautiful in a very subtle way and I enjoyed that about the story. You also used Petunia for this story and I'll admit to not reading many stories in which she was the main character, especially in one that put her in a good light. So reading this was really fun!There was one place where you used "her" instead of "he" (all the way in the last scene of the story). Other than that, there were no noticeable SPaG errors. Great work!You've kept yourself within the word limit. The school and task are both included in the AN."

Love this!
Love fics where Petunia makes better choices, and I also seriously love PetuniaXRemus! ;-)
Great job with a short fic that comes full circle.

I think this is one of the best stories with Petunia I've read! Once again you've blown me away with your capacity to put so much emotion in short stories.
It was beautiful. I love it!

It would be nice if you could continue this. I want to know if they take in Harry if Lily and James die.