Reviews for The Importance of Intent: After the Credits
K chapter 14 . 7/12
Some excellent situations in this series of one-shots. Thoroughly enjoyable.
CarolWim chapter 5 . 7/9
I read from my mobile phone all the time. I love this fic so much, but the problem is that I'm making noises and snort and laugh. I've also that crazy expression on my face and I'm constantly smiling.
Archleone chapter 14 . 6/29
I certainly would have preferred seeing Harry and friends cure Astoria more than The Next Generation being bratty.

It's like how it felt that Harry did very little in the main story. Harry's chance to be cool was waved away and skipped over to focus on less interesting things. Astoria stuff is alright. The peek into Draco's life was pretty amusing with the whole "you thought she was going to date him? Nope, she's with Neville" thing. But ultimately, I just want more Harry and Daphne.

I think my top pairing for HP fan fiction these days is Harry/Fleur and Harry/Daphne. That's not counting harem trash, which I also like if it is done passingly competently. For that, it's Harry/Fleur/Daphne/Tonks/maybe one or two other interesting people for me. Never Hermione or Luna though. They have been tainted by fanon bullshit made up by their more idiotic fan boys.

So I've been scraping the bottom of the barrel here trying to find decent Harry/Fleur and Harry/Daphne stories and I've read some real trash in the process. This story (that is, the main one, not these random bits) was one of the more competent stories I've read for Harry/Daphne. This one and Novocaine (which unfortunately isn't complete yet and the writer seems to be losing all interest and momentum) have been the best I've read in the last week or so, which is ironic because I've avoided both stories for fairly shallow reasons.

For yours, it was because I really didn't like the prologue. It implied that Daphne kind of did everything and it was going to be focused on patting Daphne on the back. And she kind of did, but in a much better way than I was expecting. Their romance was cute and Daphne was fairly adorable. Harry's whining was also mercifully minimal. He was just boring and not particularly exciting magically speaking, but the rest of the story more or less made up for that.

The bit about baking really sold me on their romance and the story in general. It's why I was disappointed that baking wasn't part of the epilogue and was instead in this collection of random bits. It was criminally wholesome.
Anon chapter 14 . 6/29
Nice series of one shots, very enjoyable.
Dangerouse chapter 13 . 6/28
Dagrid had me cackling in the subway, thanks for that
Wyrmridr chapter 14 . 6/25
Quite enjoyable. Thanks for writing!

-J
Guest chapter 14 . 6/8
Thanks for writing these stories. I really enjoyed them
Marksbay chapter 14 . 6/5
Loved it
criertuckyahoo.com chapter 1 . 5/31
Well I once again live your story telling.
udm17 chapter 14 . 5/24
I love all these short stories. Really adds a new dimension to the universe.
Magnificent the Destroyer Lord chapter 13 . 5/14
Oh, dear, that's the best ever! They frigging used a Fedelius to hide their tramp stamps... *rolling on floor laughing*

Also, like the point where it ended MUUUCH better... resolution on such things as Astoria's curse is much preferred. Many thanks for showing such in such a fun light!

Good luck on whatever projects you're currently working on

M*T*D*L*
kcrump88 chapter 14 . 4/24
First let me say that I have read hundreds of HP fan fiction stories. That said very few of them have combined the originality, ability to stir emotions, and the amazing story that you created. I thoroughly enjoyed every line of both the story and the "sequel". You have a true gift for writing and story telling. Very well done!
Lyria17 chapter 14 . 4/20
Oh, I looove these One Shots! They are awesome and give even more depth to your already awesome characters! Thank you so much for curing Astoria! 3
Will we see more?! Hint, hint, hint! We don‘t know anything about the Longbottom children! Or what Tracy is doing (and with whom). Or what happened with Ron and Hermione! Are they still together? There‘s so much room for moooore! And Covid19 means you have time, right? :D

Anyways, thank you for these awesome insights, even if it really should end here... :D
Mari Wollsch chapter 14 . 4/15
great! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
stevem1 chapter 14 . 4/8
This is a wonderful collection of loosely related chapters. Funny, endearing and interesting.

I suspect Ron was devastated when Harry retired from the Cannons.
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